AbAdDoN

Author there is really no need to explain the movie if you are not aiming for the word count instead of the actual plot

from the start of the quest, all his actions are idiotic, any sane person can tell this much. too much of the forced plot

Author there is no need to ask questions and answers in every 2 to 3 paragraphs, it is kind of annoying as this is simply common sense to leave some speculation to ponder to the readers and please stop detail his useless day to day activities like the breakfast and time spent in the school which is not necessary to the plot as it felt like you were adding those details for the word count.

it should be in pound.

The author is giving way too much attention to the info dump in every chapter and their day to day life of every character instead of the story progression and even a single breakthrough of mc is taking such a long time so that the author can have everyday's word count get fulfilled... in the end even story now feels subpar as the author don't have any interest in the story except milking money out of it's readers

yes and sometimes neutral

hope so and i am talking about the first part and definitely not the second part. if possible, make him lose his v card along with it as this never losing v card plot has also gone too long.

Author, i am truly tired waiting for something major to happen to mc. You have unnecessarily made losing his v card hard along with the other useless techniques of the mc requiring way too high resources and even all these techniques doesn't have much use now

Author, this novel is too good, story, characters, etc are all good but just one complaint that I have is that too much info dump of far future is given in every chapter

truthfully after all those power ups and hypes and if he truly missed this opportunity to that girl due to this lousy illusion then this is one nasty way to have him nerfed down