Neev123

When I started reading this novel I really like the beginning. The development of the characters was also very good. But from middle of the middle the story started to fallen. The writer didn't keep up with the suspense and the some characters were just discarded like that. I anticipated a good development for the character of Mu Shen, but that didn't happened. Why Mu Shen was interested in FL's talent was not described. The Nine Department matter was also incomplete. And her involvement in military is too little which is also a disappointment. I just tried to express my opinion. Don't take it as a harsh criticism. This is good story plot and has more room for development. I really like it but I expected more. Keep writing. ... good luck.