I'm getting there, but there's still a chance to pivot depending on if I ever get feedback

Again, depends on feedback, but the foundation for it already existst

Typical shilling for my own work review here. I'd say that it's a culmination of everything I've learned up until now. A work catered far from my tastes and to the masses. Or at least, that's what I hope. Romance and stuff will be determined depending on feedback

It's great. I can't wait to read more of this. I can only hope that the MC actually starts inventing stuff and roll over his enemies soon though. The rebellion angle is also neat

A good start. The plot is a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of transmigration stories out there. The current short length might put you off now, but it's just starting, yes? And Author said that they already have the entirety of Volume 1 written out as well, so I'll be looking forward to that

Glad you liked it

Well that was fast. Tastefully done scenes aside, the flowery prose in display here is well done. Scenes are painted beautifully and the world is being filled out nicely. Would recommend.

This is pretty well written. While I don't read in this type of genre, I can still appreciate the level of skill in display here. The Author certainly has a way with words, and the flowery prose is really what sells it for me.

How curious. The world building is very intriguing, and the way it opens in the prologue leaves just enough to make you want to read more. It just has that kind of atmosphere that really lingers as you read.

How novel. Such an interesting concept. The execution is fairly good, and just... it's so unique that I just want to see where it goes. The quality writing just makes it all the better.

Thanks for the review

How curious. The self-aware NPC trope is kind of rare in this world, and this work seems to be pulling it off rather well. I like the lead so far, and will look forward to seeing how this goes.

Thanks for the review 🙂

Well, that was pretty exciting. I've written in this genre myself, and I have a lot to learn from your work. From the way you build the world, to the way you weave the tension and mystery, it's really top-notch. Dialogue flows well too, with minimal grammar mistakes. Then again, that's really nitpicking. Keep on writing

Thanks for the review. Hope I won't dissapoint moving forward.

Good show. Characterization and world building is excellently done. It's vivid to read and novel enough that it's keeping me interested. Dialogue is also natural in it's flow. Keep on writing

Good show. The concept is well enough. Characters are relatable and the dialogue is solid. Prose might be a tad windy, however, but not really enough to detract from the story. Keep on writing.

It's pretty well written. Writing is solid, as well as prose and dialogue. Everything flows smoothly enough, and the characters are likeable. Keep on writing.

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You know the drill. It's good. It has the standard seal of quality as expected of the ever illustrious Miss Author. Will read more later. *Payment Recieved...* To anyone curious, it's an inside joke.