BloodyArk

maybe "most of the planet" as in literally the planet itself 😆

the novel needs serious rewriting, don't mind the grammar mistakes, the writing style itself needs some work, like when changing POV the author does it too many times and for insignificant stuff...

finally because I personally think, that Damien's "flashback" was UNNECESSARILY LONG! like please remind me who was the protagonist of the story? because with so many chapters dedicated to him I kinda forgot... I really had to go back to the previous chapters to remember what novel I was reading!

same

Don. Don. DOONN!!!

what about the necklace...

BS

BS

nightbringer and mage sound good to me

couldn't you make it like.. apprentice mage mage apprentice wizard wizard apprentice sage sage and depending on your attitudes and ways of study, make different wariations like... witch/warlock (female/male), battle mage, imperial mage, Arcane mage and many more