A entire chapter of talking, consider me impressed. This is one of the many things that hold eastern novels back from being great.

It seems you got chp 22 and 21 mixed up, you should swap them and fix that.

You also need to work on your grammar if you really think there are no errors...

You have the tag "thestringactingweak", but the tag you should have is masochist.

Oh, one last thing, you didn't mention it happened to the mc, that's kind of a big deal.

I didn't even register there were 4 stars there until you told me and I went back to look.

You're right I should of somehow known what the four stars were...

Wish you would of told us what the trigger warning is about so we don't have to read to find out what your definition is. Not sure what the appeal is to doing that to your mc...

I liked it when he finished his revenge and cut all ties. This chap ruins that... I guess I should have been prepared for this though based on the title.

You need to stop changing pov's so often and retelling the same thing you've already done, there are better ways to do it... Whelp, good luck.

That's not true, plot armor refers to things that make no sense in the scope of what is happening, like things that come out of the blue, out of no where to save the mc... It's not plot armor if it is built up and falls in line with the story.

Maybe, but what about the pain power? I thought he feels no pain and can even send it back or something?

This is worst than garbage and should be deleted.......................................................................................................

Another copycat, let's see how far you make it, and please tell me why you all do the stomach of cronos, who even likes reading that part.

Well you make your mc seem like an alpha but then you give him beta moments, also his powers for some reason don't always work for whatever reason I may or may not have missed. And I personally don't like when obvious threats are ignored and then the mc gets beat by someone as if surprised, when he should have known the entire time.

So he's going to teach bandits how to get stronger so they can hurt innocent people better?

Are you serious, no wonder this never became popular... Whelp good luck, I'd put a review but I bet it'll just get deleted.

So far the MC has been very disappointing, to put it mildly.

I can't believe I missed this review, wish I saw it earlier.

It seems you missed a big portion of what I wrote or choose to ignore it, either way it's fine just write however you want don't worry about me. Not like I said anything all that negative anyways, don't let me stop you from writing about kids if that's what you want, it's just not for me.