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a really good story I like the way you develop the character and plot it's really intriguing[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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it's a good story the character development is also good[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

u should use 'me' word here 'can u tell me' like that.

I think u should use don't on the place of can't.

hmm maybe you should put 'you' like I told you that it's bullshit

there is a mistake here

This is a good novel character development is also good keep up the good work[img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

this is sooo good pls continue writing more chapters[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

It's a good book there r some mistakes like u didn't use commas and some spelling mistakes. Please correct your mistakes so that readers can enjoy this book.

Good quality and character development .........................................................................................................

a good story is made by the imagination of a writer who knows how to put his thoughts in words you have the quality but you can improve more, try to fix your previous mistakes other than some small mistakes your story is good keep up the good work.

good work its a good novel worth reading i hope you have 1000+ collections some day and 10000+ review good luck and work hard i will support you.

good I like your work its good and don't believe CROCO review HE LITRALLY GIVES EVERYONE A BAD REVIEW THIS NOVEL IS GOOD. I support you my friend work hard.