GOD_OF_PATO

dude, you really need to chill on the submissive shit, it's fucking weird and really unconfortable to read, it's patetic, i really like your book but it became really hard to enjoy with the MC becoming menchi's bitch

this is the reason why your book is dying, its not wrong to have some fantasy dude but being submissive to woman it's not a very popular one, especialy in a place like webnovel were edgelords are so popular

thanks for the chapter

here's what she looked like at that time

just reassuring, im not against it, this kind of thing is part of ecchi, some guys in here might dislike it but how can you write about a ecchi world with ecchi characters without ecchi scenes

i mean... you did let him touch her, just not as long as rito but he still did, not that im against it, i loved how you posted the parts of the manga were it happened

maybe, i've had a misconception

dude went from a stick to that by just changing dna, chill bro

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bruh, the same happened to just a potato soul a few days ago, somebody seems to be hunting fanfic webnovel authors