
Hi There! I'm AweMazing and I've always wanted to get into writing. I hope to polish my skills on this platform and your criticism is gratefully received. I will however, ignore any idiotic comments.
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The man who invented the panenka is panenka. Its named after him.
Bro this is the best Indian Fanfiction I have read by a country mile. It has single handedly roused my interest in Indian History more than any History ma'am in school ever could. I'm so glad you wrote this and I found it. I hope you keep writing more! Stay safe and Jai Hind.
Bro this is the best Indian Fanfiction I have read by a country mile. It has single handedly roused my interest in Indian History more than any History ma'am in school ever could. I'm so glad you wrote this and I found it. I hope you keep writing more! Stay safe and Jai Hind.
Invisible Woman from Marvel Rivals is that you?
Honestly, a great book. Only at 24 chapters when I'm reading this, so I'll most probably need to stockpile for atleast a month or two. But the story is well crafted, no obvious plotholes (he directly skipped how he made the money, but also explained that if you've read any of the financial Fanfiction, just imagine a similar method), and the timeline also doesnt conflict much. The only problem i have is with the Main character trying to be too Low-Key. If you went and made a 100 million in the USA, you could even use that as promotion for the club, but its still understandable, since then everyone would try to fleece you. Overall a great story, you wont regret reading it.
Damn. This is one of the most well thought out fanfics I've read in a while. Not sure if its a TL or original, but massive Kudos to whoever the author is. I feel like if you are willing to spend a bit more time writing, this Fanfic can be elevated to another level, since the only things that drag this fanfic down is the AI usage. I have no issues with AI in daily use, but the problem is with the robotic prose, so most probably free gemini or free CGPT user. Claude is better but still robotic. Many times it says You're not X, You're Y, or Its not X, its Y. Or Thats not X, Thats Y. Multiple times a chapter. Or it spams filed it away. Filed it away in a place that matters, etc. Not saying you need to do anything because its a straight 5 star fanfic on this platform, but if you want to make it better, you should try to de AI-ify the fic.
Damn. This is one of the most well thought out fanfics I've read in a while. Not sure if its a TL or original, but massive Kudos to whoever the author is. I feel like if you are willing to spend a bit more time writing, this Fanfic can be elevated to another level, since the only things that drag this fanfic down is the AI usage. I have no issues with AI in daily use, but the problem is with the robotic prose, so most probably free gemini or free CGPT user. Claude is better but still robotic. Many times it says You're not X, You're Y, or Its not X, its Y. Or Thats not X, Thats Y. Multiple times a chapter. Or it spams filed it away. Filed it away in a place that matters, etc. Not saying you need to do anything because its a straight 5 star fanfic on this platform, but if you want to make it better, you should try to de AI-ify the fic.
what does it honestly change? if he deploys one year later? why cant he be safer? its not like the things are time limited. Sounds stupid and is stupid. Obviously the way the story goes, it will escalate drastically in the first year, but thats coz its a story.
Absolute Banger. No absolute OP stuff, no instant powerups except for the titular mistaken maxed stat. The player works hard, doesn't take anything for granted and seems genuinely deserving of the shot. Give it a read. Only problem is there's too few chapters.
What an amazing story man. Kudos to the writer, and kudos to the TL. I feel the emotions man. Mad love.