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Nice story with good begining. Mc has his past and balast. Good read.

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It is quite a unique take to keep changing between characyters POV. This way you better show characters personalities. Good story.

Good characters and world building. Story progresses well. Interesting read.

Good story. I like how you show main character progress. Really worth reading.

It is good story with strong beginning. You want to read more. Very interesting concept. Good luck

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Sory with good strong begining that let you feel emotions of female lead. Story is very interesting and you want to know what happened.

Nice and likeable main character with good chemistry with others. Interesting beginning of the story. Written in easy to understand language.

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Realy nice premise. Story is realy interesting and it keep you to read more. I ended reading it faster than expexted and wanted more. Good job.

Story is interesting and unique. You want to cheer on main character. Development is fast. Story shows emotions in a very good way.

Nice start, you can feel character pain

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Good unique story, that hooks you up. Charavters are interesting. Good jab.

it was suggestion how it should have been written

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Interesting premise of the story. Main character with some past baggage expierience is always interesting. Good luck.

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