psynoidAl

The story is really interesting! It's fast paced and a fun read, but the grammar could be better, though. I only hope the author can find an editor who could help him polish it :D

the story is really interesting! I only hope you can find an editor who could help you polish it :D

woah! there's a fridge! :D

it's "keeping me here against my will"

so he is now a clown who belongs to a minion?

it's . . . cut him short in unison or cut him short simultaneously

you know, I like describe the place and the scene, I only hope you can use better words to describe it :)

goat - human >> should be goat-human there shouldn't be any spaces, the same as between "dialogues"

Hmm... shouldn't the 'you leveled up' card show up 1st before the levels show up in his stats? or is that in purpose? XD

I like where this is going, it's quite interesting, but I hope you can improve the grammar :) also, the story writing is simple one moment, then you insert difficult words like 'censoriously' and 'vociferous' [img=sad] I had to look it up in google first [img=gift] simple writing is always better, but don't make it too simple. Instead of 'very big beast' you can say enourmous or gigantic also " Hello there . " >> there shouldn't be any space between "quotes" >> this is the correct format: "Hello there."