RebeccaJWW

how?

she is going to be his great granddaughter, isn't she.

I absolutely love this story. I literally laughed out loud multiple times. The family dynamic is so cute. Have already suggested it to others to read and will be adding this to my favorites list. This is one I will reread. I would love to buy it as a PDF or something so I can have it permanently in my collection and not just on this app.

They are such an adorable family.

my favourite first born son. my favourite younger son. my favourite daughter. There. fixed it. 😂

At ch.20, you could finish reading the story. It could have been a short story with no problems. If this couple were a colour, it would be beige. I am probably going to keep reading because I am curious... There is nowhere near enough grovelling. The lack of communication is beyond almost any other book I have read. The main couple don't seem to talk about anything. Or spend time together. Or have a relationship. You could think they just happened to live in the same house and kiss sometimes. There isn't a very strong connection. He is oblivious about everything. It's like he doesn't think he has to say anything, every. About anything. She is a complete doormat. It's like being hit by the car and having a new chance at life was just something that happened. She pretty much acted the same. If it wasn't for her having a slightly out of character moment that had a butterfly effect on the situation, you could be mistaken in thinking everything was going to happen the exact same way. I think what annoyed me the most was that I can see the potential. It's not original, there is nothing new here. But even with all the similar themes, it could have been more engaging. The brothers's wife and kids were only in a few lines, but they interested me more than anyone else.

Has something happened to the translator or editor? Compared to the earlier chapters, this was more difficult to read.

How can a rich guy not get a test?! Just accept any rando as your kid.

It's a solid story, but because it's so obvious, the pacing feels slow. If you have read similar stories, by chapter 4, you will believe (like I do) that not only did Emily rescue him as a kid, that he has always loved her. Unfortunately, he is one of the typical ML's that thinks the MC will know how he feels by the power of his angry comments and frowns. Who actually would ever tell someone that love them? lf this is one of your first of this type, then it is a great introduction to the genre and reads well. If you have read a bunch, you might find it a little dragging because you want things to happen at a faster pace. I am enjoying it, but I will need to be in a patient mindset to read.

I wish I had the confidence to think I was so amazing that being my agent would be a reward for putting up with my rich sister. 😆