kingdomkings

do you use spell check you have so mean works that are missing letters get a editor to check your work it is a good book

keep writing

I wish you would have kept writing this story it was great and had a good story line and if you stop because of bum a** people don't listen and keep going anyway I am going to keep giving you power stones tho love the book

please tell me your still. going to upload chapters love the book and story thanks

please keep writing this book it is one of the only books I can enjoy keep up the good work

ok I am not leaving a bad review but I have to ask I listen to the books on here with audio and your use of ----------------- hurts my ears I get you are trying to so that you are talking about the system window but I think if you use only one - the point can be seen I wish to see this. anyways thanks for a great book don't drop it keep writing have a great day.

what is with all this &Quot crap I don't get it you say this is a rewrite spell check and fix work before you release it

why do I feel that the last 3 chapters have been a way for you to tell the same story from three different people over and over omg I hope the next chapter you can get on with the story thanks

&quot why do you keep putting this in I don't understand

so are you going to keep uploading or not I hope you do I like the book so keep up the good work on the editing this version of the last book