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I am a college student who works as a part-time writer to support himself
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I thought about this one but I figured out that he would be too young.
Who told you that they will know each other??? You will understand later. Both of them, don't look like their past self. And it would take ages before they found out about each other. You might think the start is too long, but you will find the reason soon. As for the violence, I stated it at the start and made it like this after reading about Tom Riddle's childhood but I made it much worse.
I don't really know how I should respond to this. First of all, I swear I said in the description that this book is about a psychopath serial killer. Not only that, but I advised everyone that is against this idea not to read this. Secondly, Do you expect the whole world to be beautiful or something like that??? Do you know how many children got affected by childhood traumas that they never heal??? Many criminals you hear about today had a nightmare childhood for many reasons... Yes, some people would get over this and fight for the greater god but some would turn to the opposite side.
He threatened her but did not force her to drink the potion or that is how everyone saw it. The ministry was lenient with the pure blood families at this time.
I am not weakening him to this degree. I only want him to progress normally without much cheat ability. Please, wait. This time, he would not use his fists every time he has a problem. At least, he would use his head to scheme against everyone and would not kill people left and right to satisfy himself.
I have to respect your opinion. Not everyone like the same thing. I intended not to show Cersei's scheme since the start and only show it at the end for two reason. I wanted everyone to guess the mole on Edward's side and show everyone that every chapter is important. Some readers disliked the ten chapters I gave to Corenna and Brienne when they were secretly the heroes in my story. The second thing, I wanted everyone to see the period this scheme took and the hidden agenda that took place for more than twenty years. Even if Cersei was dumb, twenty years scheme would work anyway because no one would look that far. As for the other novel, I decreased the author's interaction with the MC but he would not disappear. Let's say, he would give Eddard some challenges. As for Dorne, I can't change anything about it.