Lyds04

this one has unique place names but it was a great piece... the development wasn't lacking or was it boring... everything was made splendidly...

it was good but a bit of confusion here and there.. still the character development the author always tries to achieve is there and it brings more lessons than one would actually think..

this story was created in a real life places.. tackled the feelings of the author and the ups and downs of their own writing.. its like they are showing here who they were as an author..

the stability of the story development is good.. though the world background and character description is a bit lacking... it is still a good story with great impact... morals and emotions...