darren123

sent dumbles first clear the worst of it bet grindolwald gets a free pass as only one harry doesn't have anything against

this story keeps getting better only question is can you top this?

Is it just me or does this remind you of shadow hack

has this been dropped

omg the suspense is killing me i can not wait what a bloody brilliant idea

loving the story but wouldn't the army fix any illiteracy problems and if he made it to colonel i really doubt he would still be a virgin other than that loving this well written piece hope you keep up the good work thank you

grammar's much better not perfect but at least now the story mostly makes sense

is your grammar getting worse or is it just me hard to make sense of it don't call him Mr peter its just peter instead of its in your head should be its in your hair

he has a lot of mp but how dose he stack up against the likes of dumbles or voldie

save people while looking like a terrorist ??? shouldn't it be looking like a hero?