Vicic8484

You're place => Your place?

You don't even need to unload your pallets now, just download them. :)

Should probably be "right next door" instead of "store" ;)

Congrats and welcome back. I through that you dropped it.

Oh, I didn't see that you started writing chapters again. Welcome back.

Of course we missed you, how could you leave us so long without a single chapter? :)

Thx for the chapter, I really like the real life snippet.

I think it would be interesting to know more of his backstory as we really don't know much but do what you think is best, you are the one planing and writing the story after all.

That he is a rzir*

I would replace "the rzir" by him, "the man" or something like that she isn't supposed to know that he is a fair (I think)