cryzsalix

permanent, please.

So, Oleandra's IQ conveniently went on vacation? Or how the hell are we going to explain how she runs into the most obvious trap in the universe even after pointing out said fact to idiot Harry.

I loved it. Originally I wasn't a fan of Evee having all the evolutions because it would be too OP but you handled it very well and the nerf you added seems to balance it out very well. Now, if the protagonist needs a fairy type there are several interesting options, personally I would choose Gardevoir because it is a psychic and fairy type, although for some reason those who write fanfics seem to avoid this pokemon like it was the plague.

Traitor... Nah, I'm joking, congratulations and thanks for the good work. Also, I thought the gift was funny for the situation although I'm not sure if it really applies.

I give you credit, author, you have mastered the perfect rhythm to tell a Spider-Man story.

Author, when are you going to confess that you hate Oleandra and only write to torture her even more? Jokes aside, she really needs a break.

And she just lets Cedric do whatever he wants, because she doesn't? Isn't she being too passive in this whole thing?

So the random request made to Oleandra turns out to be exactly what some dark thing in her head does to take advantage of her... Seriously, when is this novel going to stop feeling like the bad guys are the ones with plot armor?

As someone who started reading this since it began, I have to say that I feel very sorry for poor Enid, whose pain was not only prolonged but made worse by how Luke handled things. I originally started reading the story because it was stated from the beginning that the relationship would be LukexEnidxWednesday so it's a little strange that with all the development going in that direction it took such a sudden turn and Enid's role in the romance ended. I'm not a fan at the moment, but I'll see how things play out in the future.