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    rayroy4 years ago
    ตอบกลับถึง PinnacleExistence

    Thank you for leaving a review. You were the first one to do so, and I was really pleasantly surprised to see it. I can understand as a reader myself that we all want the story to ideally be fully completed and fleshed out like a book, so I do get where you are coming from. But in this case, my goal is to take it step by step (which yes, will undoubtedly frustrate you - sorry in advance!) but it does increase the chance of making it to the end, i.e. the finished book, one scene at a time.

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    rayroy4 years ago
    ตอบกลับถึง chazzyMB

    Thank you. I try to envision the story as a movie, with one scene after the other. Maybe this perspective can help you with the flow of your own writing. But if you have any feedback or noticed something off, feel free to reach out to me anytime.

Angel & Agent

'One Shot' is the nickname of the best sniper and secret agent who's about to get a promotion - if this mission goes well. But little did he expect to meet an 'Angel' on the roof that night who'd mess up his chance. But that is only the start of the weekend. The drunk angel is not who she seems to be, and soon, both fall into a web of intrigues they might not get out alive. Watch out for this action romance drama! If you only have one shot, you better make it count. Weekly updates planned. SPOILER ALERT: Now for those who want to figure out the story and the character background themselves, I'd advise you to stop reading from this point as the next paragraphs will contain SPOILERS of season one and the characters. SPOILERS AHEAD! (proceed with caution): Three candidates have made it to the final round to the next promotion as top secret agents. Alexander (aka "One Shot") with a perfect record is in the lead; Jack, a self-proclaimed rival, is close behind, and unknown to both, a third candidate is in the race: Angelica (aka "Angel"). The two followers pursue different strategies to make One Shot fail: Jack wants to make him mess up, but his plan fails when Angel interferes. She has a different motive: to make him choose her out of his own volition and give up his position as a secret agent for love. Jack mistakes her for One Shot's girlfriend and changes his plan. His new idea: kidnapping Angel and threatening One Shot to give up the promotion. Things become even more complicated when friends and family become involved, an ex-best friend's betrayal with the ex-boyfriend, and a wedding. Who of those three will win the promotion? But maybe more importantly, what are their motives behind getting it? A new order comes in and only the one who successfully finishes this will be promoted. The mission: find the traitor among the spies.

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