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_Transcendent

_Transcendent

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2018-10-22 เข้าร่วมแล้วIndia
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    ตอบกลับถึง Joseph_Long

    ??? There is basic formatting in all chapters. Lines arent lumped together. Atmost only a few lines per para.

    The air turned tense and three pairs of eyes locked onto her.
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    ตอบกลับถึง TheQuestionofChaos

    Morphers can do it to some degree but it fails as a perfect disguise since aura is used to identify awakeners.

    Ch 322 Varian, it's all your responsibility!
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    ตอบกลับถึง _Transcendent

    1. Might be if youre reading in another language 2. If not, try clearing cache in settings. (Sorry thats the only soln I could think atm)

    Ch 591 Varian [5]: A Prayer
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    ตอบกลับถึง Jeffrey_Allen_8666

    when I open the chapter, I see proper spacing. I'm afraid its an issue specificially faced by you.

    Ch 591 Varian [5]: A Prayer
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    ตอบกลับถึง Jeffrey_Allen_8666

    Cough, cough. I apologize for the near endless amount of mistakes. I assure you you're not the only one who's cringing spotting the mistakes during a re-read. I'm definitely not proud of them but it'd be a gigantic task to edit over a thousand chapters. So...I guess the only logical thing I can do is to ensure proper editing from now on. Peace.

    Ch 480 A Peek Into Celestial Paths
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    ตอบกลับถึง Rayn_Oba

    1. No issues, I am always open to criticism, however harsh it could be. We all have our blindspots, weaknesses and omissions. In something very subjective like a story, listening to what readers say is important. Need not agree with everything, but listening surely doesn't hurt. 2. Can you elaborate on lack of clarity part? I feel its mostly lacking a vision of end goal and overarching as well as interconnected plotlines. But what were you referring to? 3. Thanks a lot for your well wishes. From my side, I hope you find stories you love, stories that make your life even a little better. Cheers!

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    ตอบกลับถึง OMRAJPUT

    Thanks for the honest feedback. Yes, Pala arc would've benefitted from better decisions and proper character arcs.

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    ตอบกลับถึง Rayn_Oba

    I'm really sorry for the late reply. Yes, I agree with what you point out to a large degree. In fact, the story changes Post Abyssals made me wonder if the story got better or worse multiple times. A prime reason is that Abyssal Saga, despite the tremendous changes it went through always had a proper end goal and a clear vision. Cosmic Saga too has an end goal but the vision wasn't as clear. It was changing rapidly with each volume, especially at the start. Another major reason mentioned is pacing. I personally think its less pacing problem and more my fault, lacking a vision for character arcs and moments in the volumes that followed. I ended up reading your review and reply multiple times since it was the most honest feedback about Pre & Post story in memory. For the story as a whole, I'd say pacing had been the biggest issue. Some arcs really needed to be cut down to let the story be compact and intense. And of course, thanks a lot for the feedback. Have a very good day.

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    ตอบกลับถึง atome_4_000

    Below. Its going to end quicker than you think.

    Ch 1625 Grave Of The God Emperor
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    ตอบกลับถึง Rayn_Oba

    Hi, thanks a lot for your feedback. Can you elaborate more on this? I really want to learn more. You could do it here or if it's convenient, we could talk on discord. ( The link should be in synopsis iirc). I haven't had a proper review or feedback of the novel comparing pre and post abyssal saga. So, I'm really looking forward to hearing from you.

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    ตอบกลับถึง atome_4_000

    He is built from 1. slivers 2. Keman and Yami (strongest divine rankers)

    Moreover, Immortal is literally built from the slivers and the strongest divine rankers of the Alliance.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Space_Walker

    Thanks, I do wish I could change large bits of the beginning sometimes, but it is what it is. I take the advice to heart. Of course, stay hydrated.

    Third was that fighting Narcis would likely start a revenge story of sorts.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Grailphoneix16

    "Nah, I'd win."

    "The only one."
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    ตอบกลับถึง atome_4_000
    "Why are you stopping? Do another set. It's good for your health, old lady~. Or do you want to do push ups? Your fat will be a bit of burden, but it's fine, old lady~"
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    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistA00ZNJ

    Barely two weeks passed for Varian since their last battle and Immortal spent 1000 years training. Its not going to be easy at all.

    If Varian had to give an estimate, once his seven paths reached the peak, he could exert 15% power. If he could better than expected, maybe even 20%. And 20% was the upper limit for him.
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    ตอบกลับถึง GodGoku_2035

    Its purely because of the slivers, not due to the paths. Varian in rank 9 had already crushed Immortal when the latter was at peak of pseudo divine. The battle now is against a slivers weilding Immortal.

    If Varian had to give an estimate, once his seven paths reached the peak, he could exert 15% power. If he could better than expected, maybe even 20%. And 20% was the upper limit for him.
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    ตอบกลับถึง detroghost24

    Fairy Maid

    Ch 1593 A Maid's Duty
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    ตอบกลับถึง NamingSucks

    If Sia is a cunning fox, Sarah a stable siberian tigress and Isadora a proud dragon, then Enigma would be an innocent rabbit.

    Ch 1555 Crazy
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    ตอบกลับถึง atome_4_000

    My bad, I was assuming you were assuming something else and gave some replies. Laying this out for sake of clarity: A. Hortus is Varian's, but Sarah is also given a degree of authority. Due to Varian being peak 9 & Sarah being divine rank, Hortus timeflow was 20x compared to normal. This is for everyone except divone rankers and those made exempt by Sarah. including rank 9s. B. Dozen peak 9s appeared in Hortus in 10,000 years. Yes, thats 500 years. And yes, that is crazy. But thats a reason why Synthetic Worlds are so valued even though they only provide a fraction of thos timeflow. However, most of them are flawed and would affect progress in rank 9. So, theyre used to mass train upper ranks by sacrificing their prospects

    Humanity's peak rank 9s had already exceeded a dozen. And all of them were new faces. They remained loyal until they rebelled out of nowhere.
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    ตอบกลับถึง atome_4_000

    Yeah, they restricted their powers to spend more time with him. This way, only a few days or weeks pass outside while they would be living together for months.

    In contrast to the other two empires whose lineage could be traced back to the 12 rebels, this woman had no backing. And she built an entirely different narrative for her conquest.
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