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atm it feel like a futurist version of long live summons
boring.too overpowered for nothing . better game novel can be found
i would prefer a fake kitchen with a server that all food coming out from cabinet
i dont mind reading both pov. 1pov is good for the development of mc and his relationship. it just depend on what u want to write.
if u want to use both pov. its better to put somthing to seperate them . i lost it at the middle of the chapter.
bruh too much description of the marsh base. these chapter should not appear after the girl...i was waiting for a parlement when the girl faint.
i think he can add new things as long he has a clear image of what he wan to add
it was rewrite? because i remember the chapter were longer
the resume is good but the systeme make no sense . he should grow up like an genius child not just transform into an adult to do random things
isnt his grimoire link to his soul? if he split it can hhe ind his father book?