Herach

It's not that weird. What's with these reactions? Even an amateur knows that when the other team goes all out, there will be gaps behind them that you can fill. Especially with a pacy player.

How could he POSSIBLY estimate that?

What is going on with these names!?

Goyle Avery? You are aware that both of those are surnames, right?

This story feels like it was written by an AI..

But...why? The whole premise is that he should START going to Hogwarts at age 15. Not 11. What's even the point of all this if some AI handled him for the first 4 years of Hogwarts? Canon wouldn't be remotely the same. Like the main reason I clicked on this fic was because I liked the prospect of him awakening his magic at age 15. I wanted to see his parents' reaction. I wanted to see him catch up. I wanted to see him make friends when everyone has already grouped up. This story just went from 9/10 interesting down to a 2/10.

Yeah I knew a guy who liked to put three full lines of ~ at the end of his chapters...annoying as shit.

Sorry but come on. Their first thought when seeing unrelated ninjas without any kind of bad history exit the Uchiha compound SHOULD be that they were reporting crime or something. That they went to the police with a matter. It isn't suspicious at all.

Is this fic supposed to have the villain/antihero tag? Because I'm not particularly interested in his character so far, he sounds like a loser wannabe baddie.

Why would they be? Hating magic is sort of Christianity's bread and butter. If they were "perfectly normal" then they would likely be secular Christians, like most people around them.