Thanks for the suggestion, I use scrivener though. Has pretty much the same functionalities and a little more

Thanks, I've never actually thought about that before

Don't worry, it won't be dropped. The chapter for today will be released a bit later than usual however.

Seems so

Thanks man, that's very high praise

Sorry to hear that. Yeah I realize that everyone likes different things, personally I'm just more into swords and spears.

On Earth it'll stay grounded for a long time. But out in the universe there are already people capable of destroying worlds.

It'll all make sense at some point, but those are some good guesses

The plot seems quite interesting so far, but I'm definitely biased as I'm a really big fan of emotional traumatic stories myself. The emoticons, or kaomojis as they seem to be called. Personally I'm not a fan, and I think they detract from the flow of the story. Still, I'm somewhat able to ignore them so it's not the worst. The grammar is somewhat solid, a few shortcomings but nothing that's too bad.

My submission for the WFPC #18, visitors from another world. Feel free to leave a review or comment, I love to get feedback and hear what people are thinking.