This novel range from meh, to pretty bad there is a good chunk of poor grammar or strange wording, but still plenty readable. i have no real opinion of the characters, but so far seem pretty generic however, the game design is unbearably bad to the point of unreadability

.... the game is so disastrously bad... i cant read this

I really wish the comic did the novel justice Let's start with the art... The art is at best extremely bland and at worst extremely terrible. Something that especially bugs me something being straight up swapped with something else compared to the novel. There is the extremely cartoony look to everything aswell which I personally strongly dislike compared to something like solo leveling this belongs in the trash The picking of what scenes to include in the comic is pretty poor. Quite a few important scenes are left out nor even mentioned The design of the character doesn't grow what so ever there is no progression in his looks or personality compared to the novel I read some 250chapters but I just can't continue

...thats not what I mean at all, to be a vegetarian and not die you need some pretty specific supplements to get your vitamins and such its not really a problem in the modern world because we know what to eat and we have vitamin pills and what not

While you can do it in modern times pretty easily because of the large variety of greens you have access to. In medieval times you would have no such luck being vegetarian would be a slow death for you

I think it ended as 2 stars because of the update rate everything else is a 1

But the story is objectively garbage

This story can potentially become pretty interesting, Goodluck author

I don't really hate cliches, but it varies a bit depending on the type. Stories can always surprise, so I'll keep reading. Good luck

how people are singing high praises for it i dont know but here we go. the writing is ok, but there is quite glaring gramma issues fairly often. however i can cut the poor grammar some slack due to 2 chapters everyday together with the 3 other stories the author is maintaining, how you do it i dont know, but kudos to ya. story devlopment is decent. id consider it a tried and tested setting at this point, and does nothing radically new. im a bit curious how the author will continue, because this type of story has a tendency to become samey and dull after a few 100 chapters. ill be real i dont really like the characters that much, some of them havnt had that much time to devlop so ill give it a pass. but the mc and fl feels a bit too much like bad teen drama couple. while there is text about them, it dosnt feel substantial. i think the maid and rich boys thing is pretty cute though. and i have no real opinion of the stoic guy the world is there i suppose, its a paper cutout world at the moment, but like any world especially apocalypse world have to potential to be interesting. (someone did something stupid that caused the space cracks? potential legendary loot at old landmarks or capitals) you get the idea tl;dr not groundbreaking, but interesting enough to pass the time, updates often, so you dont forget what you where reading after 2 weeks of no posts goodluck -88

Dahm right

>magic core Dropped

troll?

she better die a most painful death, the amount of disgust i feel for her is unreal

Because her personality traits make her Insufferable

How am I not surprised

So profitable you might almost forget not to do slavery

Cringe and gets old extremely quickly

This beings me great joy

When you can pick literally anything and you pick being the brother of a guy thats bullied. >some of your powers are locked because you are human "humans have limitless potential" his second wish Should have been to be able to use the iq immediately, because he is quite clearly bordering on being able to be declared medically brain dead