MishalZamir
Lv4
An aspiring young author! :) x
2018-09-16 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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การเขียน
5h
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85
อ่านหนังสือ
ป้าย
6โมเมนต์
13
MishalZamir2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 2 Chapter 2 - Adventuring?- MishalZamir2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
that's rude, sir. apologize?
"You think you could afford this sword? Ha, don't make me laugh ya brat, get out of here before i make ya leave you're scaring off real customers!" - MishalZamir2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
aw :(
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - MishalZamir2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I already like her
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - MishalZamir2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
ah, poverty 😭
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - MishalZamir2yrแปะแล้ว
Although, I do not read this genre but the way it has been written by the author is quite good. I really like the writing style. One thing I'd like to point out is information dumping in one paragraph. It diverts the focus otherwise everything is pretty cool about this novel. I'd definitely recommend this.
- MishalZamir2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
OH, Ookay, hmm
"EMERGENCY! EMERGENCY! MOORE IS COMING TO THE TOWN, I REPEAT, MOORE IS COMING TO THE TOWN IN ONE HOUR. ALL PEOPLE ARE ADVISED TO STAY IN THEIR HOUSES AND NOT COME OUTSIDE, FOR MOORE HAS CHALLENGED OUR CLUMSY BUTT OF A SHERIFF TO A GUNFIGHT. YOU BETTER NOT FAIL THIS, YOU DUMB BUTT ANGRY BUTT OF A SHERIFF OTHERWISE KNOWN AS F4R5H73Y-01 OTHERWISE KNOWN AS FARSHTEY!" - MishalZamir2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
too much to take in. break it into parts 😭
But before any of this happened, Steve didn't have anything fun going on for him, most of the time, he's laying in bed with a dull face, and with regular, normal clothes, without his fedora, coat, and sunglasses. He lived with his maid from another dimension, Annie (Appearance: Black skin colored, large sized, overweight, brown afro hair with some white hair, and with a black and white maid outfit) There used to be a third person, called Laurie Moroder, also known as "Synthpop" but she's no longer around. She went from dimension to dimension helping other people, while occasionally fighting evil persons or beings, but not anymore because she's above us right now, and she is never going to come back, and things don't feel the same without her, for the worse. - MishalZamir2yrตอบกลับถึง MishalZamir
otherwise it's pretty good 👍🏻👍🏻
A giant spider is attacking the city, then, a floating RV is getting closer to it, inside of it, there is a 20 year old male, who initially goes by the name of Steve Terz (Appearance: White skin colored, regular sized, brown short hair, light brown fedora with a black band, sunglasses with glowing red pupils, light brown trench coat, light brown pants, black boots, and wears a black battle suit inside of him that covers everything except his head and neck) and is going to test the new battle suit he got recently. - MishalZamir2yrตอบกลับถึง Jolan_Hildebrandt
yes, exactlyyyyy
A giant spider is attacking the city, then, a floating RV is getting closer to it, inside of it, there is a 20 year old male, who initially goes by the name of Steve Terz (Appearance: White skin colored, regular sized, brown short hair, light brown fedora with a black band, sunglasses with glowing red pupils, light brown trench coat, light brown pants, black boots, and wears a black battle suit inside of him that covers everything except his head and neck) and is going to test the new battle suit he got recently. - MishalZamir2yrตอบกลับถึง romilyxusCh 90 I'm sorry