"Ever since before" ? Before need to be removed no ?

Hello, there is a few problem that came from the lack of writing experience.First make sure to separate two different persons who talk also better use "" Ex:Jack (hello) natsumi (hello)ToJack : "Hello"Natsumi : "Hello"Also use gramarly or chatgpt or anything to check the text. Good luck with the following story.

Yeah the few first chapter was similar and came to check if other knew it well I hope author can respond to that ?I don't care if the beginning is a copy but the "man of the House" had a big flaw the author liked way too much drama and all is book were drama on drama.

Nope he talking about the settings but he wouldn't have been able to help her then

I want to be clearer on the quality, it's way more readable than most mtl and as I said there is only one recurring miss. It's almost spotless. Truly a good job .

The story is good. Nothing new to the genre but well executed. The trad is uneven, In fact it's MTL and that work 95% Of the time and it's pleasing to read. The only problem is with "gun" translate by "wooden something". A bit disappointing because it's almost the only problem. Keep in mind that it's free. Thanks for the trad I passed a good time.

First time I review without reading any chapter. The synopsis is quite funny and the last phrase caught me so I don't care get your star.

Overall a really good fanfic ,well written a bit cringe /silly but not unbearable, that even add a good mood while reading. I think you should not hesitate to expand the harem (not disproportionate and not pokeharem). But with the pace of the story there is no problem. Please don't set yourself a limit especially if there will be another universe after it. (yeah I have a preference for big harem:) everything is in the pace also I love the pov chapter. The only default is the gap in the last updates. A bit scared that it will slowly be longer and longer. Thanks to the author, just don't forget that there will always be people who trash talk /dislike your choice but ultimately it's your stories. Good luck with the following.

Hello I only read 5 chapter right now but I will continue. Everything seems fine for now. The only thing bugging me is the lack of difference between the talk and the thought of the characters. If it could be changed in the future chap that would had quality to the writing. It's sometimes hard to know if the Mc talk or not. But everything else is good so it's just a little detail.

Yourself should be myself

There he seems to just take 10% less dommage. To 90 - > by 90 /or/ to 10 If what is intended was to be almost immune to fire.

It's good to have a new chapter thanks

The story is good seems interesting but there is an obvious need of editing. I suppose that is a translation work due to the high number of problem for he/she man/woman. If there weren't those errors the story would be understandable even with the other errors. But it's impossible to understand I don't know if the boss is a woman or a guy, I even begin to have doubt on the s class hunter well almost sure it is a woman. In all cases thanks for the work I hope it get better due to the interesting story.

Hello I have this story seated in my library for a while but i hesitate to read this : Could you please give me some answers 1) is the story light hearted if not how? 2) is there ntr 3) about the harem how big and mainly is it a true harem where female protagonist love /have feelings for the Mc and are exclusive so no Yuri /no open relationship. Thanks for the answers.

Slowly *:Sorry don't know why my last word passed in full uppercase

Thanks for the chapter and seems okay. Just if you could make the talk more smooth: J said : / L said : /Jsaid: ... It's a bit mechanical and weird. Every thing is nice so you can just try it SLOWLY.

Thanks interesting but seems to have problem with he/she man/woman.

Seems interesting but is it dropped ? _

Well almost a 4 star for me. The story seems interesting and I want to know more about it. There is one "major" problem there is many writing error (grammar) Thanks for the work I will continue to read it.

Thanks for the chapter, I posted a review where I ask a question about the future of the story, I would like if you could answer my questions /doubts.