CSK2023

He is a reincarnated person who is an adult and what he knows about the kingdom is only through the books that he has read or heard.He will be able to get stronger but that will come in second volume.It would take atleast 20 more chapters for the first one to complete.

The story is fascinating and well developed.The pace of the story is well groomed and the direction is clear.Overall it is a great work. Keep up your best.

It is a great with some interesting characters and good overall story telling.It would be great if the length of the chapters were to be increase.It's brilliant work

It is written well but spacing around the words and dialogues should be more accurately defined so that it will be easier to read overall a great work .The story is going pretty good and character development is coming great as well.

The first chapter you should change as it feels like sypnosis and the second chapter can be made into two chapters as it bigger than normal ones.After it gets atleast 20 chapters I will review it again to give my opinion as best I could give.goodluck towards you for your writing journey.

First the story must be seamlessly connected and there must be ton of characters with their own past and worldview.Second no plot holes and things that make the work predictable.There must be an iconic villain.Think about these two points first.

No,I am talking about the feeling one get when one read a book,like when you watched an incredible movie or an epic anime or a very good novel.you got a feeling what did I just read, or watched it was incredible kind of thing.only then I think about giving a book a movie a 4.5 star review.

I did give 3.8 because I have read many novels from western ones to light novels to manga,manhua,manhwa, various movies from Hollywood,Korean, bollywood,Tamil,British and Irish and various podcasts and have arrived at a place where it really hard me to get excited about any story,book,novel so getting a 4 or more star from me will really be difficult until it is really an amazing work.

I as the writer I can't really judge my works it is for the audiences to do that but I thought well it is atleast going to be average hence the 3 stars

Dialogues with the characters are great it will better if more characters are added to the work and and with more chapters it will be an interesting read