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Just like bell in sword oratoria, bell is only a side character but her story is continuous. This makes the story more alive and makes this fanfic feel like a spin off from the original work. If there is no bell, the factor that makes the timeline in this fanfic feel very AU. Of course this is my opinion. If you can't make it, it doesn't matter, not everyone can make a story that can highlight many characters, even if it's just a side character.

Momo can make organic materials like fruits but the taste will not be the same as the real fruit. Even in the anime, Momo once practiced by making chocolate cake and eating it continuously.

As I said reading a novel and reading a comic has a different impression. Efficient power may sound cool but when reading a novel people with the ability to disappear for example. Honestly a power as efficient as disappearing would sound boring when read in a novel rather than in a comic. Why because the fight would be boring because the description of the situation is much simpler because it uses different words with flashy abilities that can be written in a big way

What are all those practice chapters for, if you want to make a good fanfic with characters that feel alive. Make them shine too. If the mc is doing everything to keep it Canon. Then it's better to look at the original work. The mc practicing rias and members is useless at all because the storyline is basically the same if the mc interferes.

In the anime, Rias easily defeated 3 fallen angels. Kiba and Koneko were also able to easily defeat the heretical priests except for Freed who ran away. But here they are weakened, even though they have trained. Did the MC's training make them weak?

The author is a boomer wkwkkwwk

Better to lower the bell. Just have a short meeting once in a while with the mc no need to focus on the bell and just make him weak by dating aiz .

Will Ryuu get his Astrea record? If so, will Ryuu also be able to use Emiya's magic?

If there is no bell then what will happen to Hestia?

Then what's the point of six eyes mc. If you want blue eyes just make a blue eyed mc, no need for a second six eye that ruins the story jjk. This world feels like AU when there are two six eyes