Detektive

bro im confused? Isnt hank = duke? or is it theodore?

brooooo can we already have him killing the councill!!!???

Hate Rafael Gang gather here!

Writing: The quality of writing is good, consistent and with its own flair. A few hiccups and typos, but nothing that would break the immersion. Overall its pretty decent and feels like it would be polished even more over time. Updates: So far the updates have been consistent and the chapter length does not wary over the updates which is a plus. consistency is good. Story: A bit confusing in the start, especially since we start with the Girl's POV while the summary mentions it to be a MALE MC story, but give it a few chapters for the mystery and plot to settle in. Gets better and intriguing Character design: My comments over the various chapters will display how I feel about this. If you can make a reader hate your characters based on their interactions, that means a good job. World Background: This seems almost good, but could be better. Or rather I would say, the way its been put out for the readers needs a little more explanation. But maybe more will be explained as I read further. Overall: A good story so far, definitely worth a read. Score: 4.9

Huh?? what just happened?? Nvm ,,,

Biatch!

Bro only thinks with his dick or what?

New character to hate unlocked!!

WOW, how am I supposed to hate him if you keep doing him like that huh,,,,

Can we make Hank hateable? Thanks.