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Gomuningen

Gomuningen

Lv14

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2018-08-08 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen1mth
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    This is the problem with authors of fanfics that make their MC powerful, they suddenly start to pull random OC enemies out their behind since they are not capable of writing powerful characters like Saitama and either rush to NERF the MC or suddenly out of the blue, some new more powerful enemy appears

    Ch 125 125
    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    หนังสือและวรรณกรรม · Pretending_Author
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen2mth
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    +1

    2) They can be something like guardians of the realm.
    Reborn As Hades (DxD)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · illyisabot
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen2mth
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    +1

    1) Let him have knowledge of the DxD verse
    Reborn As Hades (DxD)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · illyisabot
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen2mth
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    What is happening with the sudden drastic quality drop? This needs a proofreader!

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
    When The Facade Breaks (A Jumpchain Story)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · EzioAuditore_1
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen2mth
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    *Embody

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
    When The Facade Breaks (A Jumpchain Story)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · EzioAuditore_1
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen2mth
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    This is very forced and stupid, and extremely unrealistic!

    Rowena had lost her left kidney after the blaster shot through her. Helga was mentally broken when she saw the damage her friends had taken and Salazar ... well he would never be able to live normally again. The only reason he was alive, was due to his magic, which he had to use to constantly heal him. Thoughts of revenge started to appear in his mind and he thought about the dark magic book he found from an ancient Greek wizard, Herpo.
    Humanity Unchained
    หนังสือและวรรณกรรม · Vincent_0580
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen2mth
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    No one says “sit down you bloke”

    "Goodness, sit down you bloke. I do agree with him though. I understand these children must listen to the teachers, not us. We aren't students, strictly speaking. We are guests.", Salazar said. Here we see the character of all the founders of Hogwarts. Helga Hufflepuff holds all of them together, Godric Gryffindor is the brave one who likes to rush into things, Rowena is the brilliant one who knows how to talk to the others and Salazar is the snake who can either use poison or his words to achieve desired effects. 
    Humanity Unchained
    หนังสือและวรรณกรรม · Vincent_0580
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen2mth
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    +1

    2.Megamind
    When The Facade Breaks (A Jumpchain Story)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · EzioAuditore_1
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen3mth
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    The force is strong with this author, so much forced plot that even Yoda would be impressed

    Ch 105 Chapter 105
    Naruto : Shadows of Resurgence
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Silent_stiele
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen3mth
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    Complete GPT generated chapter

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Doctrine
    DxD: God of the Bible
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · eternal_angel12
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen3mth
    แปะแล้ว

    Bro what happened to your other book, Better living through Magic? It seems to be deleted! Btw trust that this one will be great as well!!

    Fake Player
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Shirou_9689
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen4mth
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    Bro what is this cringe cultivation novel young master behaviour of Odin?

    Ch 25 Complete domination
    Odin the Boundless
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Vincent_0580
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen4mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Judderbutter

    Yes but he could at least increase his stats to superhuman levels by doing daily tasks etc. This dude just got his limitations without getting his strengths

    "He has to release some of them, it's just too much for the current him." Thalia as she knelt down towards the heavily breathing Lucian.
    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    หนังสือและวรรณกรรม · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen4mth
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    Don’t do it! Are you telling me that in the entirety of Greek mythology you could not find enough diverse monsters! Already you messed up once by saying they he killed the Stymphillian birds and ate their flesh when we know that in the PJ universe monsters disperse into ash when they are killed!

    Yes
    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    หนังสือและวรรณกรรม · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen4mth
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    Can’t blame her, she was born this way!

    Yo, I don't know about y'all, but that little girl seemed a little racist to me. Hmm, also where dem power stones at?
    Marvel's Black Steel
    ภาพยนตร์ · Ozonelayer
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen4mth
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    Are Wanda and Pietro stuck inside?

    Sara got Pharaoh in his feelings😏🥰. Though I feel like I should mention something else considering what's being focused on this chapter.
    Marvel's Black Steel
    ภาพยนตร์ · Ozonelayer
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen4mth
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    Forced plot

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
    RE: Eragon (old version)
    ภาพยนตร์ · Undeadwizard7
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen5mth
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    After almost 1200 chapters both Kisuke and Yoroichi don’t really have any major power up and still haven’t reached transcendence, just some random mentions of new useful power systems. The MC goes to Orario but still the author NERFed the whole world’s power system saying that it makes poeople too dependent on gods etc. Instead of taking it as an opportunity to allow MC to power up by going through the levels. Author seems pathalogically averse to powering up the MC

    Playing with other Supernaturals
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Goyya
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen5mth
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    +1

    Option 2. A bit of system shenanigans once in a while is okay. No need to change anything.
    Hollywood: Head-Hunting System
    ภาพยนตร์ · TheRamenLord
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  • Gomuningen
    Gomuningen5mth
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    +1

    Option 1. Wrap the Japan visit faster so that Mark gets back faster and gets working on the Killing joke.
    Hollywood: Head-Hunting System
    ภาพยนตร์ · TheRamenLord
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