A pure reader that likes to imagine and write his envision.
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Honestly, it's one of the best superman fics out there. Doesn't get your blood boiling through action just yet, but it'll come soon; I can feel it. It's for a chill read who likes logical thinking and actions.The main character, despite being superman, retains his humanity. I know it might seem superfluous but living life like a human has its charms, even if you're immortal.The relationship was a bit abrupt initially, but was executed pretty well. You can see the development and it doesn't feel that much forced and they do kinda fit well together.For the world background of the character, it's actually pretty reasonable. The psychology background is pretty neat, and uses it reasonably. Though, I think it's a bit fast to be in a high positiob as he switched jobs, the justification can barely suffice I guess. Nothing can't be perfect.All in all, I'm super hyped to see more chapters of this fic! Kudos to you translator! Keep it up.
Thanks for the chapter! Honestly one of my favorite superman fic. It's more reasonable as well and could still feel the humanity of him despite well, being inhuman. Keep it up!
This novel is awesome, please release more chapters if you can 🥺
Hello! I hope you continue writing this fanfic as it's interesting to read Solo leveling in Novel form and with changes. However, if you would not continue to write, can you kindly give the link orsource of the fanfictionitself? thank you.
I've had such a nice tine reading since I far. Little typos here and there, but everything else I think is fine. I recommend you using grammarly. There's also a chrome extension of grmmarly if you opt to use it. It will help you make less typos and grammar mistakes.
Man, we don't know who nathaniel dixon is. Should've put a location, position or even an office. It's so hard to understand what was going on at first. Still, i get it by the end but the start flew off my mind.
Oh man, don't mind us. Prioritize you family first. Putting your family first is something you should never apologize for. Anyhow, take your time and continue posting if you feel like you can, don't fotce it. Hope you and your family get back into shape soon man. Good luck! I'm sending my best wishes to you and your family.
I can see that. But here's the thing man, you don't need to explicitly tell us. You can just show it to us instead. Also, that also helps with building the excitement for us. Just a comment tho, not that it's bad. Just felt unnecessary.
Hi man. Honest comment, I kinda feel you make a lot of commentaries made by ricky about the future? I personally think that it's not necessary. I mean, I get how you want to share what Ricky aims to do and what he wants to hapoen, but I think you don't necessarily need to make a monologue for that to happen. Instead, you can embedd it into the story as the plot progresses. Instead of dumping it in one go, and I can feel that there's really no much progress on this chapter from the last chapter. Just a suggestion tho, 😊.
Hey man. Would just like to denote that you're doing good honestly. Just maintain the steady updates and you'll pick up votes eventually, as gold does shine. Just know that we're with you every step of the way.