hammody836
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in my opinion, the good thing about jujutsu kaisen is that character dies, u negating that is ruining it, i mean the author didn't give them plot armour, why would u.
i think even if u don't join the protagonist group u can take the teacher doctor from them and that swordswomen with purple hair i don't remember their names and let them be part of his harem an group, because they have some good profession , swordsmen and doctor
yeah but I gave u a an enhanced version of that sword. because the usage of that sword consume the lifespan of the user, so this sword is better, yet still there is some aspect of that sword better than this one, like that sword can copy all the abilities but this one can only copy like 5 abilities or something like that. also what's the problem woth two swords having similar abilities, I mean look at rukia and toshiro, shiba isshin and yammato, shinji and aizen. It's not a big deal that there are already some sword with same ability.
i have some ideas for the abilities of his sword if u didn't decide yet. I was think about something like copying other swords abilities and can use them all at the same time, for an example his shikai can copy other shikai abilities and his bankai can use the bankai of said copy, you can enhance and perfect the idea, u should put some limit to the numbers of sword he can copies, some condition to copy, like seeing them or clashing with them. at the end it's just a suggestion. what do u think about it.
you said that u don't want to give him a broken ability, but u know that every villain in bleach have one. (spoiler)heck even in the Quincy war arc if they didn't kill each other or yhwach killing them, the shinigami wouldn’t be able to win, they would’ve massacred the shinigami. so please don't give him something weak
technically kenjaku isn't the one holding the world back, he is trying to advance it by making humans evolve. on the other hand, all the main group trying to do is to stop him and make the world as it's (holding the world from evolution). so technically he should fight them, not kenjaku .
you know that cleave/slice is stupid cursed technique. it's weak and there are many more useful and stronger cursed techniques. for manga readers it's clearly shown that it ain't even sukana cursed technique. so change it to something stronger, give him something strong, op and under appreciated like cursed speech. heck even jugo fire cursed technique is better.
you are an amazing and great writer but I don't think writing a continuation for reverend insanity novel is a good idea. Because it's the novel is to complicated so I think, it's better if you write a fanfic from the beginning