oscarozo24

Yeah it's poop water. For some reason ppl can't nail a Dragon Ball fanfic with a human original MC.

please please STOP with the different POV's!! Just write the story from the MC's point of view. It's so bad switching POV's

This is so stupid and on a level of disbelief and cannot comprehend. No way is an asian going around buying weapons in a wwII era United States. That boy would be bagged and rushed to a nearby wwII concentration camp faster than you could say Bingchillin

Is he Chinese with the name Josh??! It's funny chinese are so racist but they are "sometimes" self aware enough to realize their names are stupid af

Is the MC going to stay in academy for long? I understand you have the academy tag, it's just that I like your writing style but have no interest in reading a young adult novel.

Mu Chuan??! That name is atrocious. In any other part of the world other than china that name is an omen of ill fortune.

That baked my brain. You should converse with random people at your local pharmacy. The pill popping drug epidemic will vanish overnight. Though you'll be entirely booked for ted talks.

Oh sorry about that. Thank you for the heads up. Hope the story works out for ya <3

Lmao, people aren't rushing to get into India.

Oh damn, you're right and I'm wrong. People just rushing to leave The United States to find their way into India. Too bad the Indian government is not accepting American refugees. They must be resentful of all the American scammers that create entire call centers in order to plague honest, hard working Indians. See what I did there? Anyway, keep believing your overlords, who needs common sense anyway.