Definitely a good story, it needs more chapters and attention. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Started with a good concept but strayed far away. After a while the world doesn't resemble the one we're promised. The characters lost their unique attributes and became 2d hentai heroines.

How did he accomplish such feats without a core and zero cultivation?

Loss of his core made him happier, I mean doesn't that mean now his power dwelled down and became powerless. If it's that many benefits why didn't he destroy his core before?

Yeah i did but does it have anything related to my review?

Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less. Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty. Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.

Like every harem stories this one has the same problem, after a while the sheer number of girls reduce their characters into "mere harem members". They lost their unique attributes in the story after got hit by mc's pinky magic. Sometimes events happen unnaturally and disconnected from the story lines. Like Grace suddenly got hidden identity and poisoned. This isn't marathon, no need to hurry, everyone likes nice world building, well thought and deep characters. In the and I can't help but like the story due to unique settings and novelty it brings, especially gender role reversal. Hope author makes it better.

Average isekai cultivation novel, not worth of your time unless you wanna waste it. It doesn't bring any novelty nor has amazing story telling, at best average.

Utterly disappointed in this novel, so much wasted potential by grammar and unstable characters. A gender reversal world where the roles reversed but goblins aren't affected and sometimes girls act like their roles aren't reversed.

It took all of my effort to pass first 3 chapters. it was like listening to someone who's mentally unstable and having a monolog with himself. Everything feels out of place, good luck with trying to read this.

Agree with you, there is something wrong with the writing

Overall it is good. After a while sex gets boring, mostly because author couldn't keep it interesting. Girls accept him as a default, no romance, no development just get laid. As a reader I couldn't feel their emotions. Story is interesting, came for yanderes and older women, still enjoying it.

Thanks for the work! still waiting older characters to show up

please just stop patting

please cut the loving gestures and focus on the battle. it's extremely frustrating when he acts like the master of the universe and rubs violet's hair twice in the middle of a fight

why the heck he touches kaguya's hair so casually?

mc is overly cringe

how did he become vampire? it looks like out of blue

Just one day and the old couple loves our mc to the point of giving up their lives. Nice drama you have there

She wants him to follow her so they can escape but she also mentions the elders in danger. Is she stupid like the boy?