David_Delgado

I see a good start I hope the story will be long imagine all the possibility you could do with this like go to build a powerful base where all the technologies knowledge and who knows what you could have imagined collecting everything you could ever think of like go to regular or come in the conquer to have more advanced technology for your choosing or go to Warframe University and continue with the storyline but instead of you there be another tenno the main character in that Warframe you could follow or go to Halo to strengthen your body as a Spartan or go to marvel and DC universe so many games, movies, animation, cartoons and more I hope you keep this up for that I will keep giving you more power stones good luck and I will see you writing soon

that's a shame I was hoping Tony Stark will Peter and could show Batman how to become a true hero or something or how he's a genius and could make more money at Batman

me to vote here

yes

For the emperor

wonderful story I hope I could see more chapters in the future and see what type of possibilities he could do I like you could do anything he want to do and I hope he could build his self a base became a scientist or a way to rebuild the wasteland to explore around the world and of course a lot of rated 18+ keep it up I know you could make the best story and I hope I can see more PS go brotherhood I hope he could rise the rank that he could control the brotherhood or small group of it hey you could capture the institute and all the research areas even the casino place where they have those that creation machines where we call it I be happy to see what he could do

here's a few items resources all the resources in the Star wars clone troopers and droids a base to build your own base to use I would love to say the star forge but I bet it too expensive also make obvious price changes were clones are more expensive because they're fully trained fully armed pretty much the best clone you could have where droids are cheap supposable machines because of how cheap they are and how you could make a bunch of them of course it's a penny of what Droid you're going for more better joy to be more expensive also I like the story I hope you keep going with it I will put some stones if I keep saying more pages in the future

I'm fine with that but I hope to see more chapters I love to read more.

thx for the chapter hope I see more.