Bloodnight

My ego? Sorry but I only want to people to judge by their self if this a mind control or not, I accept criticism but not about something that isn’t true and above all I didn’t blame you so don’t cross the line. If you want to write this review then go ahead but wait until this fic have 70 at least, don’t judge it only with this few chapters. I don’t like to report anybody so please don’t talk me like that again, thanks.

Anyway, I won’t try to convince you because it’s clear that your opinion is that this is mind control. As far as relationships will develop even more, but this is "Early Romance" and if you like it... I’m sorry. As "last try," I will say that the peculiarity does not make feelings, only that little by little those feelings of love that I had for Abe, disappear. Anyway, it only has an effect on Olive and Emma, and that quirk won’t be mentioned again in the whole story. If you are still not convinced, I’m sorry, it is clear that we do not have the same concept as regards "Mind Control", but let me tell you that I do not intend to change or rewrite the fic, so continue reading it if you want and otherwise, drop it, it’s your choice. However, I would appreciate it if you didn’t put up any reviews saying this is "Mind Control" and let people judge for themselves. This is a fic that just started and if you say that, you’re literally going to take away many readers from me, so I hope you understand that and let people judge whether it’s "Mind Control" or not. However, if you don’t want to do that, I’ll be forced to delete your review. Is it unfair? Yes, totally, but I prefer people judge my fic for themselves and leave it if it’s not to their liking. Thanks for you oppinion and sorry for saying this last thing.

And I forgot to say that the peculiarity does not create in any way feelings of love. They will fall in love with Jacob because it is him and not for the effect of a peculiarity.

I understand what you’re saying and actually you have a point, however, you must remember that in the movie, Olive (Emma in the movie), she falls in love with the protagonist for real and not like Emma in the books that has to pass through the entire trilogy to realize her feelings towards the protagonist are not real and that, instead, she still loves her grandfather. As for the so-called "Mind Control," I’m not gonna make Emma and Olive forget everything they went through with Abe. I will not make them forget that once they were in love, their experiences, all the times they spent together, that they will not forget. The quirkiness I gave the protagonist will simply make his feelings of love for Abe fade away gradually, without further ado. But I repeat that they will not forget anything suddenly, they will remain themselves, with their thoughts, their free will, etc. And if these words have not yet convinced you, let me tell you that in both books and movies, romance is very early, extremely early and do not think I want to collect girls as if they were mere letters This is a harem based on mutual respect and love, not a harem where the protagonist collects women as if they were cards. The girls will fall in love with Jacob soon, yes, but they will fall in love even more as the fic progresses, it won’t be instantaneous. And one last thing, the girls will not be mere collectible figures who wait for the protagonist to do everything while they praise him and wait for him to return. In this story, all girls (and boys) will have their own role, their moments, etc. That’s all I can tell you. If even so and reading all this you are not convinced, I give you two options, the first is that you continue to read it and the second is that you abandon it, honestly, it’s the only thing I can say to you, but do not say that it is "Mind Control" because it is not even similar and if you want, I send you a link of an H containing "Mind Control" to compare.

I didn't understand you very well but... Why did you think that is bad? In the film and the books is the same, moreover, Jacob will really loves her. And one more thing, the story prevent me to do that because have a lot of action so... I don't undertand you very well.

Mind control? You don't know who mind control really is. I won't controll them, they won't forget their feelings for Abe, only that they stop loving Abe, nothing more. If you want, I can give you a link with mind control, then you'll discover that this is not Mind Control, so please don't say that. Is like the pheromones in my other fic again.

Yes. there's a mistake, but it's not my fault. In the film, Olive is Emma (the peculiar who float) and in the books Emma is the one who have the fire peculiarity. So it's not my fault.

Yeah this film is old but... why not? It will be interesting.

Don't worry, this fic won't stop, in fact it will be one chapter every 2 days, nothing will change

Nope