Thanks for pointing it out, I forgot to edit this part

It's Brazilian Portuguese. Already fixed.

No problem and thanks for the feedback. I initially started studying english in mid 2017, stopped for a few months then returned so I'm not that much proficient yet since I'm still learning. As for the proofreader, it's a little hard at the moment but I agree with you.

Thank you for your thoughts. The reason I put a little more action into this section of the story is because the next arc will be more about the deities' past and will have more dialogue and world building than action.

Thanks for the feedback. I plan on releasing one chapter between 1000-2000 words from Monday to Friday or in the Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

it is explained later on, but soon as the last chapetrs are released in the next few days, I wll be correcting all mistakes and adding things I may have forgotten.