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Poor dude is overwhelmed with grief and decides to end it all, but then BAM - (Not gonna spoil it!) If you're into immersive stories that really make you feel something, then this is the book for you! This was great read, with great pace. Keep writing author!

This was a great first chapter, I really enjoyed the first couple of paragraphs of Zypherion just being in his own world on his way to school. Nice pace too! ;)

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I will be writing more for sure!

Great story! The idea of a character being trapped in a world that stems from his own desires and imagination creates a sense of mystery and suspense, making the reader curious about what will happen next. The way the protagonist has used his dreams to escape reality adds a layer of depth to the character and makes the reader empathize with him. The question of what will happen when the protagonist is given a chance to make his dreams a reality creates a sense of anticipation and sets up the central conflict of the story.

The protagonist's passion for theology and her curiosity make her a relatable and sympathetic character, and the danger and malevolent force lurking in the shadows add a sense of urgency and suspense to the plot. Waiting for more chapters!

The idea of a character transmigrating into a book or game is a popular trope in fantasy and science fiction, and the concept of having to choose between being a mob or a named character to survive is an interesting twist. Can't wait for more chapters!

The protagonist, Luis Lee, is initially portrayed as a strong and capable individual who has survived an apocalyptic event but has been battered and injured in the process. However, the story takes a surprising turn when Luis finds himself reincarnated in a magical world filled with attractive and powerful moon elves. Interesting plot, I can't wait for the world development and the characters that the story will explore.

The premise of the story sounds intriguing, as it presents a classic trope of a villainous character transforming into a hero. I'm curious about Urial, her struggles and setbacks, and what makes her journey to becoming the strongest person interesting and unique. It's important to have a clear sense of the character's motivations and goals, as well as the challenges she will face along the way. Adding some details about the setting and world-building could also help bring the story to life. Overall, there's potential for an interesting story!

The introduction of the lead's background and their feelings about leaving Maydawn Town and moving on to something new adds depth to the story. It makes me curious about what the lead's life was like in Maydawn and what their new life will entail. The mention of finally meeting his mother after years of being apart also adds intrigue and raises questions about their relationship and why they were separated. Recommended!

This story is intriguing, with a unique take on the classic medieval fantasy genre. The concept of monstrous creatures called "teras" attacking humanity is a great hook, and the introduction of four heroes with elemental powers adds an exciting layer to the story. The focus on Alex, the heir to the power of fire, as the protagonist is a good choice to ground the narrative and give readers a character to invest in. The idea of Alex going on a journey to uncover the truth behind the teras' appearance is a classic hero's journey, and the potential for character growth and development is high. Must read!