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Alanray64

Alanray64

Lv14

Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”

2018-05-27 เข้าร่วมแล้วAustralia
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  • Alanray64
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    This one is just a waste of time. The book is a poorly translated novel that I feel was initially written by a high schooler. The context is virtually a literal translation. The translated words are ok however when reading the novel it fails to deliver a compelling narrative. Story is about your typical poor MC, low self esteem, who can only boast that he has 2 degrees completed in education , however can only work as a basic janitor for a job at a Gym. He cleans, does reception work and is bullied or despised by his colleagues. Seriously I’d despise the muppet as well with the way he acts. Anyhow he receives a superpower when he is struck by lightening and gains the ability to enter digital data. Now this is an interesting concept which had my attention, but then the delivery of this just fell woefully flat. I really hoped it be good but I couldn’t take the flat delivery of words. The character is simply unlikeable. Of course the China is great is emphasised often, which is quite the norm for translated novels. Anyways, the MC just has no redeeming features that could maybe save this but after 13 chapters I was more put off with the flat, monotone, delivery of this. Again, as mentioned, the theme and concept is really interesting (echoes of the 1992 movie The Lawnmower Man) so yeh vastly disappointed.

    Big Data Cultivation
    สมัยใหม่ · Chen Fengxiao
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    Miss or Ms.

    "Mr. Ran, put away your sword."
    Let Me Explain, Fairy
    ตะวันออก · Sky-Scraping Tower
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    Because all he can do is flash some cash. Still nothing in the end.

    ..Look at me failing, I wasn't keeping to my words. He held Mason by the collar and was dragging him toward the room he came out of, and I couldn't do anything about it.
    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    แฟนตาซี · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Hypocrite

    One, I can't miss out on a good $600,000. Two, I don't want $10,000 to be deducted from my bank account for not accomplishing the quest.
    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    แฟนตาซี · Jeffson
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    Such a fraud. He wouldn’t have lifted a finger if he hadn’t a benefit there.

    ..I liked the fact that she was appreciative, it was a good trait.
    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    แฟนตาซี · Jeffson
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    This novel is beginning to affect my appetite. It’s becoming cloying pathetic. If this guy did this in the real world he be already dead and buried. On top of that, he is still a basic loser

    Ch 29 Pay Back The Money.
    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    แฟนตาซี · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Isnt he disrespecting them by passing judgement

    If I go back there, there's a high chance I wouldn't be able to get any kid to take me to his family. They could even disrespect me...you know kids can be so disrespectful sometimes.
    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    แฟนตาซี · Jeffson
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    He have better chance with a candy van the way he is acting.

    Now, the aim was to find another poor kid, a boy, and persuade him to take me to his family. I must do so in a way that wouldn't gather attention.
    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    แฟนตาซี · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Geez this MC is a tool. Seriously wanders into someone’s house a speaks such invasive horsesh*t. I wouldn’t be surprised if the guy gets mugged. Kinda hope he did. He was a pauper so should have some idea of life but looks like he is still clueless

    Ch 21 Why Aren't They Out There Striving?
    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    แฟนตาซี · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Hopefully this doesn’t turn out to be a strength is everything type of novel and woman should be left in the kitchen. These novels are rather stale.

    'To be honest, martial arts practice is still the best.'
    I Cheated While Cultivating
    ตะวันออก · Stellar Week Position
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    Renting out a given room? This isnt going to be all about money is it?

    If he could rent it out, he would be earning loads!
    I Cheated While Cultivating
    ตะวันออก · Stellar Week Position
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  • Alanray64
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    Thanks for the chapters, binged read a large number and now caught up once more. Still enjoying the read and the developi g character dynamics occurring during the read. I had really thought there might have been a move towards the actress Marilyn Monroe, but I just read her name in passing. Keep it going 👍

    Ch 163 Chapter 163 The Flamingo Casino Closure
    The Tyrant Billionaire
    สมัยใหม่ · DaasWolfe
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  • Alanray64
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    Is this referring to the current time line in this world? In the alternate time line she is still young, think 15 it was mentioned, so with Hardy thrown in the mix, that future is not happening?

      In later years, Sarah used various methods to introduce Taylor to Conrad Hilton Jr. the heir to the Hilton Hotels. At just 18, Taylor married Conrad Jr. but the marriage lasted only eight months. During their honeymoon, Conrad Jr. drank, gambled, and physically abused his new bride. They quickly separated, setting the stage for Taylor's eight unhappy marriages.
    The Tyrant Billionaire
    สมัยใหม่ · DaasWolfe
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  • Alanray64
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    Hmm reading the sentence, I think in hindsight, you are correct. It does indicate more than 1 mentioned.

    Before I could even come up with an answer, Olivia with an impish grin, decided to spill the beans, "Oh, Max here is the genius of our bunch. He's got some important theses out. It's a big deal."
    The Evolution of Genius: Every Night, I Get Smarter!
    สมัยใหม่ · WorldScholar
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  • Alanray64
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    Nope.. Google it

    Before I could even come up with an answer, Olivia with an impish grin, decided to spill the beans, "Oh, Max here is the genius of our bunch. He's got some important theses out. It's a big deal."
    The Evolution of Genius: Every Night, I Get Smarter!
    สมัยใหม่ · WorldScholar
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  • Alanray64
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    A pretty good read for this novel and one i am liking. MC is awakened as a Necromancer which is a hidden class. He expects to be accepted by the top academy but is surprised when the academies decide to take no death related classes as they can be swayed to defect and join the Evil God side. So begins his initial journey to stand out and gain acceptance to the academy based on merit. Sadly not enough chapters to be satisfied but I am guessing it is a MTL since the prolific use of Chinese genre names and terms. So may have to see if it can be found or someone else knows of it. Anyways, it is decent and worth the read 👍

    Global Game: I, the Necromancer, am the scourge
    เกม · Sunrise Glow
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    It never showed up? Just a daredevil6143

    Please subscribe my YouTube channel also:- @daredevil3126
    Before I Died, I Forcibly Kissed The Heroine
    แฟนตาซี · Dare_Devil_1650
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    Is this dropped? I see last update was 4 months ago.

    Ch 80 Chapter 79: Yu Rener, Goddess of the weaboo!
    Before I Died, I Forcibly Kissed The Heroine
    แฟนตาซี · Dare_Devil_1650
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  • Alanray64
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    Must be referring to a place before they refueled as only two had died on the Paru planet

    "Going back there is too dangerous." El said sternly. "Those creatures almost destroyed our ship. They killed dozens of us. We can't just-"
    Reborn as an Evolving Space Monster: Harem Of Otherworldly Beauties
    แฟนตาซี · Luna_J006
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    ..shrieked…

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    แฟนตาซี · PeterPan
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