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LastGod1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วlame
Allowing him to fly almost indefinitely if he was under the sun, even if he was pushing himself to the max.- LastGod1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
and hes perfect somehow.
He slowly came to understand that each of his cells almost had a limiter on all of them. - LastGod1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
cause u are
So he only option for getting around quickly enough without being spotted was superspeed. Which made him feel quite inadequate. - LastGod1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
the get closer to THE SUN!!
And even though he had dreamt of flying around as Superman those thoughts were quickly smothered because of his body's energy reservoir, which where nowhere near big enough to sustain him at greater flight speeds. - LastGod1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Superman doesn't run out of energy because the sun goes down. His cells store energy. The only time he's ever really run out of energy It is because he's blasted his heat vision for a long time.
And running across the ocean was also out of the question only because it would be far to much effort for him to constantly dodging around the waves and besides he might even run out of energy considering the sun had just about set. - LastGod1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
u a moron??? throw it in some ❄️
Let alone, him having any idea of activating it, but for whatever reason, now that he was holding it within his hands, he ever so desperately needed to find a way to and get the information inside, out. - LastGod1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
killer yourself.
All across America, a blur was dashing through the streets saving people, from falls, or robberies. The media soon coined the strange hero 'The Blur' after a couple days after this mysterious hero showed up. - LastGod1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Good
However, it was better to start now with trying to hide his identity, so unfortunately he began changing his hair style, and started wearing a pair of glasses whenever he went out as Clark. - LastGod2hแปะแล้ว
- LastGod2hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
So this novel is brain ded
Thus, Carl's visage revealed a hint of concern: "Teacher, I've noticed my strength continuing to grow. Could there be any adverse mutations?" - LastGod2hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
professor. or ms orora
Carl was taken aback but replied politely, "Yes, Teacher Orolo." - LastGod2hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
hes mexican he should be 4'10 max 🤣 🤣 🤣
Standing tall at 1.75 meters, coupled with an adult-like demeanor, he exudes an air of maturity far beyond his years. - LastGod2hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Sombraro superman.... i somehow dont want to see it 😕
Born into a Mexican overseas Asian household, his mother is of Caucasian descent. - LastGod2hแปะแล้ว
So this story had a lot of promise at the beginning. I really loved the thought of supermans' powerful brother who knows magic. But the plot of the other world where he goes to level up is becoming the main plot. like WTF?? That was supposed to be a thing where he got to practice and upgrade his powers, and now there is a whole plot that has taken over the plot of his original world. I mean... i know more about EVERY other world than i do about the earth. He goes to all these magic places, and it was cool for a while, but then im keep asking myself. Is he gonna be a hero? Is he gonna have a life other than running around and solving problem or fight in some other rando worlds war to upgrade his magic. Cause this all seems like some battle manga where he just goes from one fight to training to another fight to training ect. Doesn't feel like he has any loved ones nor any real relationship with anyone barely talks to clark. Just seems like fight and getting stronger is all thier is to the novel it why i like well done OP MC novels.
- LastGod3hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
yup im done bye
'Granger hates when someone outperforms her. Has been happening with me in Charms, Transfiguration and DADA since our first year. It's really becoming tiresome now,' Harry remarked mentally. Valerie looked at the girl who was now talking with a redhead from Gryffindor and turned back to Slughorn. - LastGod3hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
did hermione die???
"Makes sense to me. You were the highest scorer in the exams last year, with a distinction in Potions despite Snape grading the subject, so it's obvious that the man would want you there." - LastGod3hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
hes afraid of malfoy??? come on.
Valerie saw Harry still looking agitatedly at Malfoy's retreating back before she slowly pulled him inside. - LastGod3hแปะแล้ว
Seems like another chatgpt book. Harry not friends with hermione wired abrupt changes in certain things that happen. To tell the truth this would be an amazing book. It just needs to include harry's best friends .or any friends as it looks like the other characters that harry cares about have been killed off so it can be a stroy JUST about harry and bella. It also needs to be edited and writen like a book and not like a machine. thier a part that feel like this is a novel but i can feel the place in the plot that seem machine influenced. It just doesn't make sense that harry who has been starved of friends his entire childhood would actively not want friends when he finally has a chance.
- LastGod3hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Ron and hermione???
Harry entered the compartment alongside Valerie and promptly shut it. He always used to ride the train on his own, but there was a difference now. - LastGod6hแปะแล้ว
Seems more and more like it is written by chat gpt the plot seems like an after thought the more u read its cool to actually see a superman in marvel doing superman stuff but i dont see any connection to people he has no one he loves some of the character interactions dont make sense and then their is a flash back that makes him seem like a toddler. Just everything makes it seem like this is a child that got these powers and not a mature adult.