KingRapha

make this shir Sasuke fanfiction why bother mention the mc ehen he only the things he do is flirt and be lazy. Like who cares about sasuke hes only using him to get stronger but the concentration in everything is sasuke like cmon its so stupid even the desicions of the mc everything is so stupid and lazy cant take this shit to seriously i thought the author will improve but getting shittier and shitter fucking low quality work

true the magic of fanfic the diary but we were given by 2 weeks later stuff ehy bother make a premise this kind if ur not gonna concentrate on it chinese writers man so dumb

the most useless thing ever didnt even bother to use it once.

do u even proofread bro? too many mistakes. check first before uploading. you only need a minute to read a chapter so check first before uploading please.

one chaptee for entering the cave and opening it what a work of art lol

the original is much better than this. Like really another mystery i though u will improve story but its not its lame.

typical mistake with this traslation people. why bother translate it properly to english when u make the biggest mistake of all the names and etc. like did u even read the OG work cause if u read the OG u will directly know the names like cmon man do some research first before translating. i appreciate ur work for translating it to english but do some justise on it

fuck this guy. can't believe will upload shit without proofreading. such a fucking rookie mistake. cmon every chapter there's always a mistake and the problem is it's not the grammar it's the names wtf so fucking dumb. Ur translating but u can translate the grammar properly but the names cmon bruh.

Is so dumb wheres the consistency????

Man a fanfic trying so hard lol really a chapter for this?? Like really? Wasted stuff its fanfiction u dont need to waste to explain everything. We already know it in the iriginal. Lol