Discarded

this smut atory got potential. the premise is so interesting! sadly the writing quality is so poor. pov keep changing around without notice. it get so confusing to read

says the man who wrote transgender hentai

telling reader that this book gonna confused them unless reading other book is a bad idea. imagine star rail fan want to read a fanfic but then they need to read a whole another book to understand this? just create a chapter and explain in summary what reader need to understand based on from that book instead of telling to read that massive book. mostly got no time or want to spend that much effort just to read a fanfic which probably won't complete anyway

step me pls

the gremlin

the beauty

ara ara material

the badass haircolor

the seiso one. probably

sugar mommy material