Painskeleton
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Painskeleton1yrตอบกลับถึง PainskeletonAuthor if you are see this then some tips (just my opinion) -no need to have that much harem very quickly. Have at most 6 or 7 and gradually show their interest in MC. - MC had no need for enhancement ...you could have given him new powers through force. ( stick to one type of power ) - Do not complicate stuff such as control of fate and all from the beginning unless he got hurt by it. (it matters not If someone if higher being, it is not related) for example if he wanted to kill someone but force stops him more than 3 times, then he will resists. - let him have male friend or normal acquaintance as well. - no need for comidic stuff most of the time or that much dialogue of things MC thinks in his mind. Hope this would be helpful anyway this was a great novel even though I could not finish it. Will try your other works sometime
- Painskeleton1yrตอบกลับถึง Painskeleton
In addition....I forgot to write this. You may have already seen others comment but I'll still say, the world building is very good. Plots are gaad as well. It's completed so no need for updates. Characters are not that good in my opinion but creating a genuine character that everyone likes is hard.
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I really loved it till end of volume 1. But from the 2nd, it got bad atleast in fir my taste. I think i would have liked it when I was just starting to read novels and harem and overpowered mc and such. But now not so much. So I'm pretty sure you would like it but there could come a time when it will depend on your taste. But I recommend you to atleast try to read a few chapters.
- Painskeleton2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I just remembered....and noticed... Cavill...as in Henry Cavill..the superman
"My name is Luke. Luke Cavill." - Painskeleton2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
maybe the nodding guy is a girl *nods*
I left the arena and school just like that. Now, no one will questions me why I skipped class. I have a sound reason as to why. Everyone must have seen it. It's sad that I won't be greeted with a nod by the nodding guy ever again, but my future is at stake. - Painskeleton2yrตอบกลับถึง Hokonoso
Universe...pfff He exist here among us... searching for new disciples
For his part Norman returned to concentrate on the computer screen, he did not know how much time had passed until an email message appeared, the name of the sender was Henri Ducard. - Painskeleton3yrตอบกลับถึง Painskeleton
wanna know even better---- vibranium
Although the main role of building the Great Wall was handled by the Hero King's powerful metal manipulation ability, the nobles had assisted in every possible way to hasten the transport of metals to the area. Only a select few with special fire element abilities stayed on site to smelt the metal wall into one solid structure. - Painskeleton3yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
5 FINGER SEAL
"Tro I Mo…" (Spirit Sealed) - Painskeleton3yrตอบกลับถึง Erelbrinx
do u remember ......... HERO bhakti hi shakti hai
"U Ke Ti…" (Spirit Awaken) - Painskeleton3yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
isn't that Japanese
"U Ke Ti…" (Spirit Awaken) - Painskeleton3yrตอบกลับถึง Bratiranjan_Dey
- Painskeleton3yrตอบกลับถึง Frozen_Prince
and his balls are small
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noooo runnn
At the word friendship, Beluga and Antonio showed frightened faces. It was the dreaded friend zone! - Painskeleton3yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
*shocked* if you haven't ****ed a tree you aren't living life
"…I've never tried. You don't know." - Painskeleton3yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I'm iron man 'snaps'
"Leon Bradford." - Painskeleton3yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
watch what-if in hotstar.
But that is all a what-if situation. They cannot unseal their bloodline ability and can only lament in regret. There is also no medicine for regret. Damn.