NoPayReads

The word scrambling that this site does to your book makes it really hard to give a proper rating. The one star I give is not for your book, but the site itself.

I like the story and development. I do see what everyone else is saying with the dumb protagonist comments. My first thought when looking at the skills he chose is that we are looking at a skill synthesis story, yet the protagonist, who claims to be thinking about potential skill combinations when selecting them, turns around and acts suprised when he can synthesis skills. What really bothers me is you build character on all these side characters and then you deus ex machina them to die. Just bam dead. Felt very forced, like you as the author got a little bored with all your characters and decided to scrap them while keeping the plot.

I guess Wednesday will never come...