jijonagaroor

I would wait if I were you. your lack of updates would have lost a lot of readers. So my suggestion would be to start updating chapters on a regular basis and then go for full-time if you find that you have enough readers. You can also create a Patreon account as that would give you a good idea of your reader base. But the most important part about Patreon is to have regular updates or you would find no backers.

Good novel, but am a not so sold on the romance as it’ immersion breaking especially since vince is still a 15 year old. Otherwise the premise and structure is very solid.

thanks that make sense.

why is he only choosing male heirs. he comes from our own time, is he misogynistic in thinking that a woman cannot rule. I know that Hans is shown as intelligent, what about after him, is he under the impression that no woman from his dynasty will be good enough.

I think you need a glossary chapter or a flow chart to show the structure of the nine star domain. its too confusing.

a suggestion. you should release chapters frequently since this is a new novel. a chapter every 3 days for a novel tha has less than 15 chapters will not be enough to keep a readers interest. to increase the viewership you need to increase the frequency until you have around 100 to 150 chapters. the best course of action would have been to write atleast a 150 chapters and then post the chapters 1 or 2 sails so that you always have a buffer stock if you have writer's block or some scenario where you cannot write. all the successful authors on wn follow this method.

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I feel the author is extremely inconsistent. he has 0 information on the inheritance he got and instead of researching it. he simply ignoring it.