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Ignoring the slightest grammatical errors in the story, the mother and daughter pair has a nice relationship, thus make the story admirable. It is relatable in real life in a way.

The characters and the plot are great. But the author could make some improvement in his/her grammar, story line and dialogues. Nice work dear author. Keep it up! ;)

Hello. Truth to be told, I was quite confused by the first chapter. As I progressed, I could understood and fathoms all the descriptions and details in the novel. It does describe very well how depressed people thought. We, everyone of us have some imaginations, how to make the world a much better place to live and etc, and in other time, we sometimes preferred silence more than bustling people around our proximity. It's that complicated. You did a very good job with your story. But it will be much better if you could develop it in a proper plot line.

Hello. Thanks for every love. If you will, could you please leave me some decent reviews? Really appreciate it. In return, I'll give you one code in which you could redeem 100 coins.

You'll know if you read more. psst..I had dropped few hints here and there. 😊😉

Thank you very much for your wishes, support and the power stones. My daughter so far doing okay although there's some glitches in her steps but June 3rd she will undergoing a brain test to monitor her brain waves, either she had unknown seizure or anything else. Do pray with me she'll be healthier. And for your info, I'll publish a chapter everyday, starting June 1st. Tq again.

When you love someone deeply, you will become too sensitive by that person's actions.

Thank you so much for your well wishes and thank you a lot for the gift too. 🥰😊

Cheater is the most selfish person in the world in my opinion..as they have many excuses to justify their actions.

yeah but we can't dictate other's perspective as most people said they are the epitome of love. 😊🙂