chenemi

This is a great read, I love how the author expresses and captures each moment and I love how fast paced the book is, I look forward to more chapters from the author!

Give up? after coming this far?

I like how we get to see how the main character is adapting to everything around him but I feel his complexities can be expressed more. The author is doing a great job in keeping readers hooked!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

The second chapter was great, I think you should work on your transitions though as you move forward so it'll be easier for your reader to catch up with your flow.

great first chapter! Intriguing start as well

I love it! can I suggest using grammarly(the free version) to edit your work? there are some places where spaces are needed and makes it quite hard to read but overall this a good first chapter.

As per tradition, I will now proceed to shamelessly give my book a 5star review in a quest to welcome all new readers and urge you to add this beautiful story to your libraries. Cara and Connor's story begins on a train but it goes way deeper than that, their complex relationship and the journey of how Connor becomes her purpose is one of the most amazing stories I've ever written. I honestly can't wait for you to read about them and it turn, live them.

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Here I am as it has now become a tradition for me to give a five-star review to all of my novels hehehe. This book is something that has been on my mind for a very long time, a beautiful story about love, betrayal, and the complexities of a friendship turned into something so amazing, add this book to your library, and you won't regret it.