I mean thanks. I feel like a story like that is sometimes too predictable. Your criticism of the story isn't really a criticism as it is part of the story development where the MC turned into a human. Not everyone will want to stay in a form that they are not used to, maybe only you I guess. Go write your own story, of course not for free, but I doubt a lot of people will buy it.

you can't bully a person whose first language isn't English. I hope you understand why you got flamed in the reply. You try to justify yourself by saying sounds like, but what really sounds like is you wanting a harem, and rejecting his opinion because your preference comes first. Your comment is more of an order compared to the guy who is just stating his opinion.

I agree pineapple shouldn't be in all types of pizza but there are certainly types of pizza where pineapple goes well with. Unless you don't like pineapple as a fruit, I suggest being open minded, else you don't know what you have missed.

Would the choice of a hero go through a cycle? Because if the choice is that limited, then I feel like they would have dug out every hero secret and potential. Also, if the MC starts getting strong, won't others just copy him and get strong too? Since it seems like 1 hero can be bonded with by many people.

Pigs have a similar digestive tract as humans, and they produce similar flesh and skin as humans. They just have a special organ that also converts toxic waste into fat. So if you eat fat pig fats, then you are eating the toxic waste it has converted.

Water clone I bet.

IM, heard she is immortal.

All that sounds quite good not gonna lie. Tbh, the romance without romance is call of the night. Reincarnation without reincarnation is omniscient first person point of view and one other that I forgot the name of, and also you can't forget the Lord of the Mystery, if you know, you know. I can't help but say you are quite brilliant, maybe make some novel with these concepts. I'll certainly read it.

All gone from just two bite of a magpie.

I mean pretty much confirmed if you look at the Easter egg in Arcane such as Powder melt down and the ending scene. Also, the recent trailer for season 2 shows Warwick and singed. And Vander is regarded as the guard wolf or something of the undercity. So yeah it is foreshadowed in season 1, and will be confirmed in season 2. In the lore of Warwick, the most recent memory he has is of a child crying, which correlates to powder crying on his body. A bit of a spoiler for Arcane season 2, Vander wouldn't have any memory of Powder or Jinx. Since he is a creation of Singed who is from Zaun, he will be an enemy of Vi and Caitlyn.

I thought he only smiled for his family member 🤣

how did you know?

dang 1v2 immediately. I can't see a reason why the hokage would approve of this. Even with trust he will doubt a 5 year old ability and only let him fight one of them. Letting a child fight two top ninja graduates will seem like bullying and not a good look for the hokage.

A bit weird where real people are written in a fanfic. A sense of disconnect because their personality couldn't simply be replicated in the story.

By Xolu and you're Xolu.

My first ever novel I have ever read that kickstarted almost a decades of reading.I'll give it all 5 stars just because of how impactful it is in my life.It isn't the best in my opinion, I didn't finish the story, getting about 100th to 200 chapters. But at that time it was an amazing accomplishment as I literally don't read a book or novel past 3 chapters. The novel is just enough for me to read until 100th chapter or so until I get bored and find something else to continue from there.It did teach me that it was alright to drop a novel and find another novel which will make me continue reading. It convinced me that I have the ability and the potential to read a book when I am interested enough in it.It also teaches me not to see the word but instead crafted paintings by the words. And in a style that I would like because I am the director of my own imagination.10/10 story for beginners. The plot is not too complex, easy to read, and helps in branching out even if you do not like the style of the story.

Your name...

? ? ? don't know the anime, but is incest all there is in the anime and the story?

I guess it is the saying of doing or die trying.