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LuluViBritania9hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว... why do all the mc's that get Sukuna's powers fanfictions have some idiotic need to make the mc act like Sukuna or be villians...
"Kill points: 0/100"- LuluViBritania9hตอบกลับถึง Indra_
except that's not a thing in Marvel in regards to Sorcerers, there is no talent or affinity. It's an entirely mental thing
"We sense no magical potential within you," one of them explained. - LuluViBritania11hตอบกลับถึง NICODERBOP
Either you need to get your eyes/ vision checked, or your somehow reading on a different font because one has spaces where the other does not “ I “ “I”
" Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck..." Shen Long started cursing. - LuluViBritania2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
our homeland*
"I did." Victor replied. "But I can't put that over the responsibility I have to those I now lead. Besides, my mother would never forgive me if she learned I saved her just at the expense of your homeland. So once more demon, no deal." He spoke. - LuluViBritania3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
The woman replied*
"My, what a gentleman you are Victor." The man replied. "And it is a pleasure to meet you as well. My name is Zora Vukovic. Leader of the Latverian resistance as your service." She revealed. - LuluViBritania3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
yes just tell the prisoners their rescue isn't the most important thing to you, great way to build love.
"Simple. It is because I am Doom." Victor replied. "Now, let us end this. I have better places to be and more important things to do." He spoke. - LuluViBritania3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Heh
"It suits you." She said. Stepping closer until she was in front of me. "May I...touch it?" - LuluViBritania3dตอบกลับถึง Dextroller3x
Doom will not suffer such a paltry death, so Doom need not fear capes!
My long badass green cape flowing down behind me. - LuluViBritania3dตอบกลับถึง KALIISTHEBEST
Inability to Taste and sleep iirc Irene’s backstory correctly
He had always thought the black dragon, with its immense power, could live a much more comfortable life. - LuluViBritania3dตอบกลับถึง SAINT_of_ORIGIN
Once you show a set level of power all the factions are going to want to recruit you, you either join one or get hunted down and killed as no organisation likes powerful unrestrained actors. Which ever faction you join you will have to obediently listen to its higher ups or die
So if I went out right now without knowing how to control my energy and encountered anyone of either Sona or Rias' peerages that would just be screaming "Hey, I am available to be recruited as a peerage member! Please pick me!". - LuluViBritania3dตอบกลับถึง WanderingFool
No making to many oc’s and oc arcs is deviating away from fanfiction into its own original story, people read fanfiction for the characters they love. If you want to make different story arcs sure but for fanfiction you should stick with actual characters from the fiction your stories set in.
A/N: Although the story will take place in DxD, a lot of it will be original content. I don't have much interest in following the main plot. Many of the main characters will be here, but for all intents and purposes, this is a fully Alternate Universe with very mild crossover elements. Happy reading, I guess. - LuluViBritania3dตอบกลับถึง JTGTitan_96
I’m writing a comment not a story only my meaning needs to get across.
Once everyone was done they took a brief break to ease their minds a bit before the second portion of the class began. "how could you just let me suffer like that I thought we were friends!?" Tracy asked dramatically. "You could see the board just as well as I could , besides I was the first person here so I got started earlier than everyone else is all." Nick said with a scoff. "I'm still mad and I'll only forgive you if you give me a special spell no one else knows!" she said while puffing out her cheeks. - - LuluViBritania12dตอบกลับถึง Halt_Jagged
That’s only to avoid copyright laws in actuality it would be called Dragonball
"Enough about that. I need to go and watch DBZ," Rias said, standing up and walking out of the student council room. - LuluViBritania12dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Nothing wrong with not following the main plot but if you create 8+ oc’s in order to stay away from it it’s bad fanfiction.
A/N: Although the story will take place in DxD, a lot of it will be original content. I don't have much interest in following the main plot. Many of the main characters will be here, but for all intents and purposes, this is a fully Alternate Universe with very mild crossover elements. Happy reading, I guess. - LuluViBritania12dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
How do you mess up something as basic as Koneko’s hair colour? It’s white not silver
–Toujou Koneko. - LuluViBritania13dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Experiance as a janitor is experiance as a janitor they are not going to care if your uneducated after you have experience for the job
After that, he tried to find another job, but of course, it was difficult for an uneducated person like him. He could read and calculate because the people in his previous workplace taught him quite a lot of things. But he didn't have any school certificate, so he couldn't get any job. - LuluViBritania15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I’m knew that!
I turn around like nothing happened and continue walking "Of course, I already knew that." I feel the stares on my back before everyone just accepts their fate and begins following me. - LuluViBritania16dตอบกลับถึง lRyuji
Iirc seastone is just the essence of the sea solidified so it shouldn’t do anything to a devil fruit user that falling into the sea wouldn’t do
Fall in the sea: You will lose the effect of your devil fruit, but you can still swim. - LuluViBritania17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Guild master…
When the little boy heard Makarov's answer, he raised his head in surprise and looked at the old man in front of him. He had a white mustache and a Mediterranean-style white hair. He was wearing a white cloak and his shoulders were decorated with golden shoulder pads. There is a medal hanging on his chest. It's him, Makarov Dreyar , the president of Fairy Tail, who is good at giant magic and is usually a protective little old man. Could it be that I have traveled through time and been reborn?