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To clear up confusion for future readers, he is Baelon from the books who died a stillbirth. He lived in this timeline but was sick and named Rhagear instead. Hope that clears everything up.
Thanks for the chapter. I left some power stones. I'm going to wait until this arc is over before reading again so I can read it all together.
A great story idea that is plagued by bad grammar and editing. You have sentences where words are combined together with no spaces, and there is no " " for characters speaking. You need to go back and edit chapters that have this issue. The story is good but has so many errors that it's almost unreadable. Advice from a fellow author: Get Grammarly or an app like it to fix your grammatical errors.
I'm writing a bad review because he never finished the story! I bought the Patreon to see the end, and it never finished! It's been months, and he moved on to his other stories with no conclusion to this one. At least tell your readers you're done with it. The story was a 4/5 before that.
Anthem videogame combination of all the armors into one
Sorry Everyone. I've been slammed with work, school, and things in my personal life. No chapter this week will update soon thank you for your patience. I will make up with a double chapter when I'm back.