Nevarus
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I love reading various LNs and I've gotten into some of my favorite series fanfics lately. Other things I love doing are playing games and playing the Piano.
2018-03-21 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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Nevarus21hตอบกลับถึง FanFictionForge- Nevarus21hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
while faculty could be technically correct if looked at in a certain way, you should use a different one as it's an awkward use of the word.
"Damn old man, he won't leave me alone," Potter pondered angrily as he sat by the fireplace in the faculty lounge. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
is Dumbledore a woman in this fic? is that the key but of info that I missed?
After the Headmaster finished his speech and took his seat, the students began their breakfast. Taking a seat on the edge of the teacher's desk, Hela looked at the students. The Goddess of Death knew full well that Dumbledore would not allow her DADA professor to be replaced, which was why she had chosen to teach History of Magic. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
head girl again.....
- Albus, I respect you as a strong wizard and Headmaster, but your connivance with Weasley will backfire. This, as you put it, the well-mannered young man did nothing when Ron Weasley started insulting not only Harry Potter in public in the Great Hall, but also the Head Girl of one of the faculties, a girl by the way, which does not do credit to the young man. I have already reported many times that Percival is failing in his duties, he is the reason why freshmen are constantly late for classes, and he doesn't want to help his fellow students when they ask for his help. Percival has nothing on his mind but affairs with his colleague, Ravenclaw Head Girl Penelope Crystal. He's a bit of an arrogant prick, and that, Albus, is, you appointed the boy head boy, well I quickly corrected your mistake. No more Weasley's will hold the position of Head Girl in either the faculty or the school. Power and Weasley are two incompatible things. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
failed to catch potter ignorant is correct technically, but the following "he could punish him" makes the sentence mean the following. if Harry answers correctly then he gets punished. failed to catch him ignorant means that you catch them competent. if you take out the failure or change ignorant to competent, then it would make sense and be correct all around.
Life and studies at Hogwarts went on as usual. Harry was quickly making his way among the top students. However, there were some problems. One of them was the Dean of Slytherin, Severus Snape, who tried to humiliate Harry every chance he got, and if he failed to catch Potter ignorant of his subject, he could punish minor offences. However, Harry missed most of these detentions because Slytherin didn't want to go to them, confident that he had done nothing wrong. The other problem was Ron Weasley, the worst student in the class. The red-haired Gryffindor annoyed not only Harry but also the other students with his stupidity and lack of manners. Weasel attacked Potter almost all the time and was constantly getting a beating from Harry. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
ignorance? alright author please for the love of God, use the right words.
Smirking and realising that he had failed to pick up on Potter's ignorance of the subject, Snape gave Harry fifteen points for the correct answer and, scoffing, headed off to Gryffindor. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
is this Google translated? first head girl when talking about Percy and now headmistress when referring to Dumbledore.
Minerva, though she respected Albus Dumbledore as a powerful wizard, didn't understand why he actively encouraged bullying among her students. The Headmistress had bypassed McGonagall to appoint Percy Weasley as the new Head Girl, which she thought was a mistake. After all, the professor knew that any representative of the Weasley family should not be allowed in power, as it was too corrupting to weak-willed redheads. And now the woman intended to correct that mistake. As soon as the professor ushered the two Weasleys into her office, she immediately took away Percy's Head Girl badge, assigned them both two weeks of classes with Professor Snape, and took 200 points off their marks each. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
head girl?
- Don't tell me what to do, snake eater. Whore Eater-" Ron didn't care who he insulted, it didn't matter if it was a freshman or a Head Girl, as long as it was a Slytherin. Besides, Sixth's older brother, the Head Girl of Gryffindor, fifth-year Percy Weasley, supported his brother in everything, so he didn't discourage Ron's desire to insult Slytherins. The youngest son of Arthur and Molly Weasley hated students from other faculties on a genetic level. It was the way he had been brought up. Ever since he was a child, Ron had been taught that Puffenduys were weak and stupid, and it didn't matter that the faculty had produced many outstanding wizards, such as the current Director of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, Amelia Bones; in Weasley's opinion, the Claw students were bloody nerds and geeks. Reading books and studying was abhorred and despised by the Sixth. Ron had learnt to relate to Slytherin with his mother's milk, literally. Molly Weasley, maiden name Pruett, was not only known for her rambunctious behaviour at Hogwarts but also for her daily fights with Slytherin students. However, fights were not important to Molly, they played a secondary role, if she could beat up a Slytherin girl, then fine, and if not, then no big deal. All of Hogwarts knew about Prewett's debauchery, except perhaps Arthur Weasley, who paid no attention to this truth because he was busy collecting various Muggle things in his spare time. Already in her fifth year, Pruett had earned the nickname "The Redheaded Whore." The summer before her sixth year, Molly ran away from her wedding, which was organised by Lord Prewett. As a result, the family's prestige plummeted, but the Prewetts' reputation was finally damaged when Molly married Arthur Weasley, the heir to an impoverished family. Ron Weasley grew up to be an ill-mannered, greedy and stupid boy. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
does the author hate all the Wesley's?
Until a noisy red-haired family, devoid of any manners, entered the cafe. As soon as their order was brought to them, the real horror began. The youngest son of the red-haired family started eating disgustingly. The red-haired twins began to mock the people sitting at the neighbouring tables. It was a sight that made Harry admit that there were rude ignoramuses among the muggles too. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
what is wrong with leaving his name as Harry? it doesn't need to be short for something.
NAME - ≪Harold James Potter (alive)≫. - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
tomboy? when referring to a boy?
It had been some time since Morgana and Hela had rescued Harry from the Dursleys. In that time, the boy had grown, gotten stronger and looked his age. Harry no longer looked like the little tomboy he had been to the Dursleys. Gradually getting used to his new surroundings, Harry spent more and more time in the library, where he read both Muggle books and works of magic. However, not all of the books were available to Harry yet. The girls reasoned that Harry was not yet ready to learn the advanced sections of magic. They would be available when Harry's magical core stabilised, which would not be until he was 16. Nevertheless, Harry was not discouraged. - Nevarus1dตอบกลับถึง TheManUnderTheBed
it should be more as a base.... assassinations are much higher than that
"Fifty thousand a job, more depending on the threat," Mark said bluntly - Nevarus1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
not just paranoia....
Mark sighed "You have until I reach the nearest airlock," he said as he walked past him, he didn't need to turn around to know that he was being followed, for a while neither of them said anything and instead just walked through the corridors of the watchtower until finally, Batman spoke "I was wrong... I let my paranoia get the better of me and the result of which has almost left us broken," he said. - Nevarus1dตอบกลับถึง ScarletQC
I'm confused..... are you being sarcastic? because atm they are being incredibly racist (talking about batman and the others).
"I had thought that perhaps the presence of the Meta-gene would negate his alien DNA from surfacing so I just kept surveillance but now I realise I was wrong, We have no idea how strong he could be with two sets of powers" Batman continued as he headed towards a repel line that went up to his plane. - Nevarus2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I will be
"I hope you're ready, world, because I won't be easily defeated" - Nevarus2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Snape wouldn't function as a spy if that's the case.... unless he was never a spy for Dumbledore, never took vows, etc.
Harry could have done this to him anyway. Voldemort was better at the mind arts than Snape was, and there was the added advantage of the Dark Mark stripping away all of a Death Eater's defenses to one who knew its secrets. However, it was so much more satisfying to take him like this without a struggle, and return some of his bullying in kind. - Nevarus2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
hormones, really?
" Come on mom. I didn't do it on purpose, really. It is all my harmones making me do these.. "Harry said 'innocently' making both Lily and Hermione shake their heads. - Nevarus3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
11 not 12
Moreover there is something I did not tell her, my eyesight is already much better than before thanks to the exercise, meditation, nutritious meals prepared by Alfred and 1000 fold positive results from my system. In fact I am not that scrawny kid with hidden injuries and illness inside his bodies, I look like I have been taken care of very meticulously. I don't have huge muscles all over my body or a look of a 15-16 year old like a monster, but the power hidden in this very fit 12 year's something looking body is enough to handle a healthy adult man. That, with my combat mastery, hehe, I'll soon make batman seem like a kid. - Nevarus3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
that's 10.96 years of straight meditation.
Putting this matter aside, I again started my occlumency training. I think that If I give 6 hours everyday to it, than I will be at Dumbledore's level in around 15-16 days. - Nevarus3dตอบกลับถึง WolfLord
and bins. doesnt he drone on and on about the goblin rebellions?
But it brought me an unexpected surprise!!.. While I was asleep, my system distributed the rewards as I had asked it. With some rewards like improved stamina, speed and thinking, I was also rewarded with an improved teaching ability. I always used to think that if I know something I can be a good teacher. god no.. teaching is a skill that not many have mastered. I think that by the time I step into Hogwarts, I will be a better teacher than many professors there.